Just finished reading your Buffy script, nightflyer. Heres what I thought.

[screamfan]

Let me start by saying I am not really an expert on script writing so I can’t say whether it was really that good but what I can say is what I thought of it. And what did I think of it? I thought it was really good. I really enjoyed it, (if that was made into an episode, it would have been a lot better than some of the season 4 episodes) Reese was a really cool villain. But the problems I had with it were that willow was a little under used, it would be better if there were a little more of her. I didn’t like the flashbacks every couple of minutes (it gets annoying after a while) other than that it was a really cool script and I loved it! I really enjoyed it. Have you written another script that continues the story? If you have then please send it to me as id really like to read it. Like I said if it were made into an episode it would be a lot better than some of the other’s. I hope you don’t mind about the criticism, I really did like it but with a little improvement it would be better.
Rating 8/10 Excellent script you did a good job considering you wrote the script based on someone else’s characters and still managed to stay true to all the characters.

The comedy aspect of it was fine.

[Nightflyer]

I found it hard to use Willow, for the story relied more on Reese and Buffy. But it's only a first draft so I can try adding her in more later. I might try writing it in Novel Form rather than script.

As for the continuation. I was going to end it two ways. 1 for Reese to be killed by buffy or, for her to get away and go to LA to hunt down Angel, which would become the continuation. Haven't decided how to finish it yet.

With the Flashbacks, I added them to get to know Reese as she was and the only way to do that is flashbacks.

Thanks for the feedback..

[screamfan]

i think if your going to continue it do it with her going to LA to track down Angel. but its you script its up to you. the flash backs i was talking about were the ones that buffy kept having (the ones with the master in them) but the flashbacks with reese were good and like you said it gives you the chance to get to know here better.