Anybody interested in reading first 10 pages of a script?

[syxxpac]

I just completed the ten or so page mark on my science fiction thriller, and if anybody would like me to email it to them for a test read, I'd be more than happy to. Basically it's just the opening scene but I want to know if it's effective at all. I have to type up the rough copy, but that won't take very long at all. Also, this is my first actual screenplay work, so if it's really bad please go easy on me. And if it's no trouble to whoever reads it, could you give a response either here or via email. It would really help me in deciding what's good, bad and what just works or doesn't work. Thanks.

[radiofreememory]

send it to me

radiofreememory@hotmail.com

[Heatherstoner]

send it to me


Funkymonkey473@aol.com

[syxxpac]

Actually it's more like seven pages.

[syxxpac]

Bump.



[This message has been edited by syxxpac (edited 07-18-2002).]

[syxxpac]

Sorry to be such a pain in the ass, and I know I'm being one, but if I could get at least one opinion it would really help. It's only seven pages so far, so it's not a lot to read. Thanks for the help.

[notchreturns]

ddowner1@aol.com

[p13k]

i wanna read it, please.
faux@zipmail.com

[The Lizard King]

I know how to read!!

deathbot3001@hotmail.com