actressgirl_05
03-25-2002, 09:15 PM
Hello everyone! I'm a young aspiring actress from Ohio and I'd like to tell you about my new movie I'm writing. I'd like some feed-back on it...just to make sure it doesn't sound to corny for some people.
The movie is about this girl named Rachel and a guy named Darrin. In high school, Rachel had a crush on Darrin but he turned her down by calling her a loser. They go off to college...her going to New York, him going to Columbus, Ohio (go figure). It skips to after college and we find out Rachel is a successful architect and Darrin is a buisiness man. He gets a job in New York, and to everyone's surprise he ends up moving to an apartment right across the street from Rachel. They become best friends, facing problems such as bad bosses with broken asses, friends that get drunk in the middle of the day, and stolen cars. She gets a guy and he becomes jealous. On New Years Eve her guy tries to take advantage of her. This is such a devistating thing for her that she turns to Darrin for comfort and they end up hooking up. The next day his ex comes and states that they never truly broke up. This pisses Rachel off so much that she decides to move back where she came from. Now Darrin has to run after her get to her, before she decides that she doesn't love him. In the pouring rain on an interstate he declares his love for her and they all live happily ever after.
If you want, give me a review. The way I look at it, any publicity is good publicity. So far I have 65 pages. I could use some advice to fix some of the blotched areas. Thanks for sitting through this...
The movie is about this girl named Rachel and a guy named Darrin. In high school, Rachel had a crush on Darrin but he turned her down by calling her a loser. They go off to college...her going to New York, him going to Columbus, Ohio (go figure). It skips to after college and we find out Rachel is a successful architect and Darrin is a buisiness man. He gets a job in New York, and to everyone's surprise he ends up moving to an apartment right across the street from Rachel. They become best friends, facing problems such as bad bosses with broken asses, friends that get drunk in the middle of the day, and stolen cars. She gets a guy and he becomes jealous. On New Years Eve her guy tries to take advantage of her. This is such a devistating thing for her that she turns to Darrin for comfort and they end up hooking up. The next day his ex comes and states that they never truly broke up. This pisses Rachel off so much that she decides to move back where she came from. Now Darrin has to run after her get to her, before she decides that she doesn't love him. In the pouring rain on an interstate he declares his love for her and they all live happily ever after.
If you want, give me a review. The way I look at it, any publicity is good publicity. So far I have 65 pages. I could use some advice to fix some of the blotched areas. Thanks for sitting through this...