mary lou 102
04-15-2002, 08:49 PM
so what do you think about the opening pages it is just character stuff but if you like it ill tell yall some action scenes cut to http://www.joblo.com/ubb/redface.gifpening logos and credits fade to white:suddenly loud frighting score peace blars out and screams of"ohhhhhh gggggggooooddddd!"and "stop it" can be heard you see a womans eye ,a ceiling fan ,a blody knife ,and the killers mask in 1 quick second fade to white: nice peacful and erotic music"sorta Dressed To Kill style"plays wile the camera walks its way trough a room into the bathroom. you see clothes on the floor and the sound of the shower running. the camera gets a shot of the water nossel. John Presscott,a 15 year old high schooler is shown washing his hair then moves to his face,legs,feet,and ass. you see hands turn off the shower ,grab a towel and wipe the steam off the mirror.John smiles in the mirror.a hand with a knife pops out and strikes.John wakes up.He hears music on his stereo and turns it off. he gets dressed takes the keys and gets in his car and starts to drive.You can see the suburban trees and friendly neighboors as John admirs the strret of suburbia.We make a transition to the school were John puls in a parking place and gets out.we see cheerleaders practicing,people kissing and other things as john walks to class.THE BELL RINGS.John walks out of his class and meets up with Jeremy Riely,his friend.THEY WALK DOWN THE WHAT LOOKS LIKE DESSERTED HALLS.THEY START TO TALK Jeremy: so how was class,i heard you got detintion John:yea idid so did Joe