View Full Version : Ideas For A Creature , Villian , Or Monster?

05-08-2002, 07:40 PM
I am writing a short story and I always use already exsisting villians (Leatherface , Jason , Freddy etc...) But im sick of that crap I want your opions on a villian or monster. Like does it have supernatural abilities..or what details please.
I need no help with kills for this story

reply plz

Hell Phantom
05-08-2002, 08:01 PM
Make a super vampire. He is 5"8" and is pure muscle. No hair, yellow eyes, massive fangs; a black, leather, trench coat; black boots, and a black, short sleaved shirt.
He is a master of the katana. It's not his fangs you should be afraid of, it's his sword that has been sharpen with lasers making it able to cut through almost anything, like a human as if he/her was hot butter.
He can fly by tranforming into a half bat/man thing. In other words, it grows massive wings from his back. It's head turns into almost bat with red eyes. It looks like the bat creature from the batman cartoons but, like I said, has it's massive wings on its back, like the creeper. It can smell and hear from a mile away. He has super speed and strength and in his animal form his powers are tripled but the sword is now worthless to him. His nickname is Reapers Wing but his true name is Hawkson.
Oh yeah, let me read your short story when you are finished.

I hope that is enough.




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Freddy Krueger
05-12-2002, 10:56 AM
how about the killer is a priest, no one will expect that.

05-12-2002, 11:16 AM
How about a teen werewolf/shapeshifter who goes around protecting people from vampires? Well, that's a story that I wrote.

05-12-2002, 12:18 PM
how about:
king thong the giant maneating super girl?

05-12-2002, 09:59 PM
Yeah i think the Priest idea is good....
Yeah definetly a crazy physco priest demonic priest would be awsome

05-12-2002, 10:05 PM
how about.........MICHAEL J. FOX



Hell Phantom
05-13-2002, 07:03 PM
<font face="Verdana, Arial" size="2">Originally posted by Freddy Krueger:
how about the killer is a priest, no one will expect that.</font>

It was done in Silver Bullet but that don't mean it won't work.