MICHAELvoorhees
07-01-2002, 09:37 PM
I don't have a title for it yet, but i wrote a summary, and here it is:Starts out with a bunch of friends hanging out at a graduation party. Ben, Ryan, and Scott are talking about their band and how they need to find a singer because none of them can sing and play their instrument at the same time. Dan suggests that Ben's cousin Beth could sing for them, but Ben explains that she is already in a singing group. We cut to a dark figure walking in the shadows outside of the house. He/she has a pair of pliers and cuts off the power line. Rose walks into the house and tells everyone to leave because they blew a fuse. Ben, Ryan, Scott, Dan, and Kendra walk around. Dan says that he forgot his car keys and he has to go back for them, everyone says bye and goes on their ways. In the house, Dan yells for Rose but there is no answer. He walks upstairs. He yells for Rose again and there is still no answer. He walks down a hall and into the last room on the left. He sees his keys on a table by the window, he picks them up and runs downstairs. As he is about to walk out through the door. But there is an envolope with his name on it taped to the door. He opens it up and it has a picture of him at the age of 13 in a school hallway. On the bottom of the picture it says "upstairs". Dan yells for Rose again because he thinks its her. He hears a strange noise in the bathroom. He walks in and sees a shadow in the shower. He slowly opens it, suddenly the killer pops out with a hunting knife and starts to stab him several times with it. The next scene shows Ben, Ryan, Scott, Beth, Rose, Kendra, Jake, Jack, Shawn, and Kathy after the funeral. They talk about the possibility of who the killer could be. After that, Ben is running up to his mansion. Suddenly, he starts to think about Dan again. Suddenly he flashes back to seven years earlier. Ben, at the age of 11 is walking down the hall with another geeky kid. The geek says that he owes him five dollars, and Ben says he doesn't own him crap. Then young Dan starts to pick on them. Next, Ben and the rest of the band are performing. Ryan is playing the guitar, Scott is playing bass, and Ben is playing the drums at a jr. high dance. After they are done they go in back of the stage and sit down. They start to talk about Dan's death again but Ben asks to stop because he doesn't want to think about it anymore. Beth runs up to her apartment. She goes in her room and notices that her closet door is open. She sees a shadow in it and walks slowly towards it. When she looks in, it's just her prom dress hanging up. A hand touches her shoulder and she jumps. She notices that it's just her roommate/cousin Crystal, she explains that the door was open because she was borrowing a shirt. Beth says that she won't be home the next day because of a fourth of july party. Crystal asks why she wan't invited, and Beth explains that she doesn't know, Crystal gets very pissed and just storms off. Ben is in a diner and runs into Shawn, they talk a little about Dan's recent death, which is also Ben's loss. Ben says thank you for going to the funeral. Ben invites Shawn to the fourth of july party the next day at the football field. The next day, at the party, the band plays a song then walks into the crowd. Ben, Ryan, Scott, Beth, Kathy, and Kendra sit down and start to talk about how Kendra is moving the next day to L.A. and how they will all miss her. They put on fire works and some heavy music. Suddenly the cops show up, and people starts getting their stuff and running off in cars. Kendra is left and says that Rose is a bitch for leaving her. She walks in the school to find a pay phone. She suddenly hears a noise from the stage in the auditorium. She yells in if anyone is there. Then, she runs back to the hall to look for a pay phone but she can't find one. Suddenly, in a dark hall the killer jumps out from a bathroom and stabs her in the shoulder with a scalpal, she screams and runs, the killer chases her through the hall and she slips on water. The killer walks closer as she struggels to get up, he graps her by the hair and stabs her again in the stomach, she elbows him in the gut and continues to run. She makes it out the entrance and runs into a car. She hides on the floor in the backseat. The killer walks by and sees her through the window. She locks the door, but he goes through the front and crawls towards her with the scalpel, the camera shows an above angle of the car as we can hear Kendra's scream of pain. Ryan, Scott, Rose, Jake, and Jack are sitting at a table in a bar. Ben shows up and apologizes for being late. Ryan asks if he was with Kendra and he answers no. Rose asks if he's seen her since the party because she hasn't shown up, he once again answers no. Kathy comes from out of the bathroom and says "Well Ben showed up, but Kendra didn't. You'd think she wanted to hang out with us before she has to move." Scott says that he hopes Dan's killer didn't get to her. Then Ben says that Dan had a lot of enemies and no one would want her dead. Suddenly Ben flashes back eleven years earlier where Kendra and Rose were picking on him. Then they start to talk again about the band. Ben walks into his brother Eric's room, Eric is hanging out with his cousin Kerry and her friend Mary, Ben asks if he has had any calls, Eric says no, then Ben leaves the room. Mary asks why he was acting so weird, and Kerry explains that his friend was murdered and another is missing. Mary asks what he's doing for his birthday, Eric says that there is a party at the mansion in a few days. Mary tells Kerry that its the best chance to get revenge on Ben, Ryan, and Scott for a prank that they did on her. The next scene shows Ben as an eleven year old walking down the school halls and Kathy walks by and starts laughing at him saying he looks like a retard. Ben suddenly wakes up realizing that it was a nightmare/flashback. Kathy is about to leave her house when suddenly her little sister Ally starts bothering her about where she is going, she says she is going to the mall to get Ben a gift for his 19th birthday. Ally and Kathy say bye to eachother. Meanwhile, Crystal is looking at pictures of her, Ben, Beth, and Kathy hanging out as twelve year olds. Crystal gets a pair of scissors out and cuts Kathy out of the picture. Back to Kathy, she is walking out of the mall and towards her car, she tries to open the door but it is locked, she digs into her purse for her keys, she takes them out but they fall on the ground, when she bends down to get them a figure holding a pipe starts hitting her over the head with it as blood splatters all over the car. After she is dead, the killer takes her keys. Jack is about to leave his apartment but Jake asks him where he is going, Jack says he is going to Kathy's house to pick her up for a date. He drives off in his car to her house. He walks up to the door and knocks on it, Ally answers and says she just pulled in and she is in the garage and to tell her that she is going to her friends house. After Ally leaves, Jack runs to the garage. He looks in the backseat and finds Kathy lying there dead. He screams when suddenly he hears the garage door close then a buzz, he looks behind him and sees the killer with a chainsaw. He saws Jack's arm off, and he falls to the ground. He tries crawling up to the door but the killer saws one of his legs off, then his other leg, Jack keeps trying to crawl with his one arm, but the killer takes the saw and saws his head off. It's suddenly two days later and Ben, Ryan, Scott, Beth, Rose, and Jake are talking with a detective. He explains how they must find a link with their past and the deaths/disappearances of Dan, Kendra, Kathy, and Jack because all the families got pictures of them in seventh grade in the mail. None of them have a clue so the detective leaves and tells them to contact them if they can think of anything. Rose says that she is very worried and Ben says that they should go on with the party tomorrow night and see if they show up, they all agree. That night, in Ben's dream he has a flashback at a seventh grade cafeteria. Ben is sitting with Ryan, Scott, Beth, Crystal, Rose, Kendra, Dan, Jake, Jack, and Kathy. Chaz, the geek from the earlier flashback, and another geek Donald ask Ben to talk to them. Chaz asks why he isn't sitting with them and Ben says because he likes them better. Donald asks why and he answers "because they don't use me for money and act like jerks for no reason. they are actually my friends." Chaz and Donald both threaten to kill him, but he just laughs and sits back with the group. Ben wakes up and his parents are in the room. They ask if there was something he wanted before they leave on their honeymoon. Ben answers that he'll be fine with the maid there and everything. Later that night, the party has started. Everyone is there eating cake. Beth is talking to a guy when suddenly Crystal walks up and tells him to go away. Beth says "what the hell are you doing?" and Crystal says that she invited herself to the party. Beth says that it wasn't right, Crystal says that she has her own right to come to her cousin's 19th birthday party. Beth responds by saying it's her fault and she shouldn't have broke the friend ship two years ago. Then Beth says it's the same reason why she wasn't invited to the road trip that Ben, Ryan, Scott, Rose, and Kathy were invited to. Crystal says that if she's not invited then she would rather have them all dead then have fun then she runs off. We see her in the kitchen picking up a meat hook, she smiles and sees the maid walking in, Crystal has a panicked look on her face. Now we see Jake in a room full of weed bushes, he is smoking weed. Suddenly the lights go out. Jake asks who is there, he hears footsteps behind him, suddenly the lights go back on. He sees on a table a picture of him in ninth grade. He looks behind him and sees a hooded figure with a bag and a bucket, the person walks towards him, takes a hook out of the bag, and hooks his left hand to the table, then he hooks the other hand to the table. Jake screams for help but no one hears him because of the loud music. The killer takes out a scalpel and cuts his stomach open, he rips out some intestines and puts them in the bucket and lets blood drip in it. Then the killer leaves letting Jake bleed to death. Kerry and Mary walk into the garage, they look through a window and see that the band is performing. They are finished with their song. Ryan says that he's gonna leave his guitar in the garage. The two girls hide behind a car as Ryan walks in real quick to set his guitar down. Then he runs back in and loud music suddenly plays. A car pulls up to the garage. A guy sticks his head out and yells for Kerry. Kerry says "shit, that must be T.J., he must have something planned. Wanna come along?" Mary says "no, go ahead, im gonna pull the strings off his guitar. Then I'm going to steal that bike and take off." Kerry laughs and says "Ok, cya later." After T.J. and Kerry leave, Mary looks over at the guitar and notices that it's missing. Mary says thats strange. She turns around and the killer hits her over the head with the guitar as blood splatters all over the garage. Beth walks up to Ben and Ryan and says that Crystal went crazy and Jake and Rose are missing. They just say that Rose is swimming and Jake is getting stoned. We see the hooded figure in the trees watching Rose swimming. Rose swims underwater across the pool, as she does that, the killer pours a bucket of blood into the water. When Rose rises above the water she notices that there is red liquid in the water. She looks across the pool and sees a picture, it is of her at a seventh grade dance. Rose says "shit. is anybody out there? i kno-" before she can finish the killer drowns her in the pool of blood. Ben and Scott talk in the living room as everyone is leaving, Ben says that he's starting to get worried about Rose and Jake. He says he is going to look for them. He goes in the garage and finds Mary dead. He gasps and the hooded killer walks behind him and nearly stabs him in the back, but he runs. The killer chases him outside and into the woods. Ben runs into a tree and gets knocked out. Beth continues to look for Crystal but she can't find her. She looks in a bedroom and screams. She sees Kendra with no skin, Kathy with a beaten head, and Jack in body parts. She runs out of the room and upstairs. She screams "Ben? Ryan? Scott?!?!" She runs into another bedroom and gets out a hunting gun. She walks slowly out of the room. She walks into Ben's room. "Ben?" asks Beth. She finds the maid with her throat slit on the bed. She runs down the hall and stairs and runs into Ben. "Oh Ben you have to help me! Kendra and Kathy and Jack and- there all dead!" screams Beth. "Have you seen Ryan or Scott?!?!" asks Ben. "No, we have to find them. But let's get Rose, she's in the pool. They walk through the garage and into the patio, they see Rose drowned in the bloody pool. Beth screams and Ben gasps. They run back inside. "There's a- a chance that Ryan and Scott are still- we have to look for them." They walk down a hall in the mansion. They find Shawn. Shawn says "everyone's dead!" "Duh." says Ben. "Let's look for Ryan and Scott." Suddenly Shawn takes a scalpel and stabs Ben in the back. Ben suddenly flashes exactly five years earlier. He sees how him and Shawn were best friends and did everything together, but in seventh grade Ben became friends with Ryan and Scott and forgot about Shawn. He wasn't even invited to his 14th birthday party where all the victims plus Beth were invited to. Ryan and Scott suddenly run out with weapons. Ryan drops the axe and Shawn picks it up, he chops Ben's head clean off with it. Beth, Ryan, and Scott have shocked looks on their faces. Ryan suddenly looks very pissed and stabs him in the back and right after, Scott takes the axe and chops his arm off. Shawn drops to the floor. But gets right back up, he is suddenly shot several times and falls through a glass door where he gets stabbed by several broken shards of glass. Beth drops the hunting gun and drops to the floor crying, as do Ryan and Scott. They think the danger is over, but watching them through the window, very pissed and psychotic is Crystal holding a hook ready for her revenge.
p.s.:
The character Ben is based on me, and Jake is based on Justin (Madman Marz).
p.s.:
The character Ben is based on me, and Jake is based on Justin (Madman Marz).