The story game

[Corpse Candle]

Yes I know I'm the guy who complianed about the games before but that's dead and buried.
Here are the few rules for the game.

*Write ten line each not over not under.

*Use fresh nasty idea's I know you schmoes have em.

*Make it as horrific as possible(I know you can).

Lets go.

Feverishly searching throgth his cupboard he knew he must find it his heart was racing like a vaulve on an engine.
Griping his chest icicles of pain shot into his toros causing him to fall to the bare wooden floor.
He began frothing at the mouth his eyes darted around the pitch black bedroom like a doomed fawn CLUNK the bottle he was searching for landed inches from his free hand.
Clawing torturously for it a whirpool of agony sweeped him and finaly his body gave in.....

[Spider-man 2]

He opened his eyes, watching everything dark, he was leaning on his left shoulder. He could see a small puddle of blood beside him...it was his. He got up with great effort and sobbed. As he looked up, the most frightening thing he had ever seen was revelead. Stuck to the roof, a huge red, bloodshot eye stared at him! His heart almost stopped, he could FEEL fear!

[Corpse Candle]

Scamberling to his feet in a pathetic attempted to evade the monstrousity he felt the pain agian.
Fear wracked his body as well and freezing beads of sweat trickled down brow like ice water.
He stumbled as he moved back away from the red eyed figure he bent down to reach for his pills that were still in there bottle on the floor.
Why did I create it he thoght.
"DR.Stanger the only doctor capable of creating life from death".
He whispered as he wept.
The Dr bent down pain sething in his chest he picked up his pills then CRASH the shattering of a window unleshing the elements outside and some far more unnatueral.

(I know I have broken my own rules but as long as it's around ten lines it's cool).

[spacemonkey]

He thought he was having a heart attack. He needed those pills now or he would die!
He picked up the pills and swallowed two of em as fast as he could..GULP!

Still...he couldnt believe his reanimation experiment was actually working..and growing! The red eye wich he was trying to reanimate was now stuck on the ceiling of the laboratory, up there it hung looking at him. And to his surprise it had now grown to five times its original size...and tentacles were extending from its sides reaching for him...he had to get away!

[This message has been edited by spacemonkey (edited 08-14-2002).]

[Adrian4712]

Quickly he stumbled to his office where his desk was. He searched the draws fevently. He found it, his six-shooter which he kept for protection. He had had theats on his life before by many bleeding-hearts. The same people who blow up abortion clinics and protest against stem-cell research. He was always looking over his shoulder and aways protecting his work. How bitter the irony tasted when the very thing he protected and gave life to was now trying to kill him. He checked the small snub revolver's chamber, two bullets where loaded in. He took it and quickly shut his office door and locked it. He slid to his knee's and pulled the phone from his desk. He quickly phoned his brother who was a police officer at the Winterson Police Dept. Before the second ring the hidious monster bust threw his door and sniffed at the air. "Pick up dammit", Kurt whispered to himself. The monster gave a loud hissing shriek and flipped the desk over breaking the phone's cord from the wall. "Behave yourself!", Kurt demand of his ghastly creation. The monster lunged at Kurt just as he shot the creature twice in one of it's tentacles. The creature swiftly wrapped around Kurt and drained him of all his bodily fluid. The creature loosened it's grip on Kurt who then dropped to the ground. His white face twisted in agony and his eyes were sunkin' way back into his head. He was dead. The creature rapidly busted through the labratory doors and was out on the streets...angered and confused...

[Corpse Candle]

The creature staggered wrecklessly unshackled from order in it's footsteps it wandered throgth the forest clearing into the night.
Trying to think but it's mind was unclear without knowledge of why it exsisted and with rage and hatered it's only familar feelings it stopped and glare into the distance of the small town below.
Standing stiff and strong now on the cliff edge it roared.
"GAAAAARRRRRRRRRRAAAAA".
Pain,hate,confussion ravaged it's mind like swarm of feasting maggots.
Aston Grail's dropped his shopping as he heard the hellish cry and spotted the unnatuerl shilouate on the edge of BRACKEN HILL that's when it started.....

[FeydRautha]

Two blocks away, Tommy was seeing his girlfriend Sheila home from a date. They stopped on her parents' porch.
"I had a great night, tonight, Tommy," Sheila smiled at him. "Thanks for taking me to the Luau Lounge."
"Well, I'm trying to prep you for our eventual honeymoon on Waikiki," he replied, which made her giggle. She opened her mouth to reply, but was cut off by a ragged scream in the distance. "What the f*ck was that?!?" she gasped.
"That sounded like Mr. Grail," Tommy replied, looking in the direction of the noise. "I should go check, see if he's okay."
"Tommy, no! Let's go inside and call the police," Sheila insisted.
Just then a huge shape leaving a trail of human blood burst through the foliage across the street from Sheila's house. The huge eye glared at the two lovers.
Sheila was stunned, in shock. Tommy stared aghast, then turned to his girlfriend. "We've got to get inside. Give me your keys, quick! Sheila?! Give me the DAMN KEYS!!"

[Corpse Candle]

Shiela fumbled for keys that were inside her purse.
"COME ON!! Shelia get a DAMN move on"
Tommy panic as he witness the monolthic frame of the creature advancing across the street towards them.
Shelia found her keys and struck them into the key hole and with a twist of the wrist the door was flung open.
Backing into the house tommy and shelia starred and the now motionless titian.
It's arms ravaged with surgical stiches attaching various types of human and animal flesh togther and all in varied stages of deacy.
The torso of the huge mutant a feast of weeping sores thriving with maggots and flies it was also of an animal and human fleash compound.
Legs powerfull and twisted established from every concivable organic material.
With it's a gleaming red eye and the other develishly malignat it slowly stepped towrads the house.
It's mind still a mass of chaotic images,pain and sounds it was still trying to create a thought process it did not know what was happening but it did know what it was going to do next.....

[spacemonkey]

Tommy was looking out the window of his girlfriends house and could not believe what he was looking at. "Sheila does your dad have a shotgun or something we can use to protect ourselves with?"

"I think he has one in the basement Ill go check!"

Sheila ran downstairs to the basement. Meanwhile Tommy looked at the creature who was right in fron of the house. It looked to Tommy like a giant eye with arms and legs.
Suddenly Tommy noticed that it started to rain. As the rain fell on the creatures body Tommy noticed that it had a strange reaction...it started to twitch and convulse, until what looked like little eyeballs started to pop out and all fall on the grass.

Then Tommy opened his eyes wide with surprise and fear..the creature was now giving birth to more of its kind.. http://www.joblo.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

[Corpse Candle]

The nemly spawned life forms lay squirming on the ground starting to develop and grow within an instant of hitting the ground.
When the spawning had finished fifthteen poorly formed mutants stood in the night mist gruugling and screeching their new born crys.
The huge beast above them bellowed in return as if acknowledge the arraviel of it's abominal children.
Tommy held shelia tightly as an demonic siege commenced.
Shelia searched the house for a means of deffense when a heavy thump followed by an electrical blackout.
"Oh chirs..."
THUD
Tommy was cut of in mid scentence by a gigantic thundrous sound.
Tommy held Shelia's hand as they backed away from the window outside turned into pure choas as the whole community scurried away for saftey and as an empending doom decended upon Shelia and Tommy Tommy silently prayed for help but from where......

[spacemonkey]

Tommy dared another look out the window...It was still there, giving a huge growl, looking around with its giant eye. Tommy thought he had better hide away before the creature notices him. Too late. The Giant Eye suddenly fixated its giant stare on the window where Tommy was.

"Shit! Come on Sheila!" and they both started to run in the darkness towards the back door. A strange thought passed through Sheilas mind. Shed used this door many times before. Too escape on a date with Tommy, sneak out to the movies with her friends, smoke a little weed in the backyard in the middle of the night...but escape a giant mutating eye with giant tentacles? She never thought this would be happening to her. This SHOULDNT be happening to her, she was not going to die tonight.

"Tommy wait, Ive got the shotgun. Why dont we just blow the damn thing away?" suggested Sheila in a desperate plea.

As Sheila said this, a loud crash came from the front door, as if someone had broken down the wall of the front of the house.
Could the creature had gotten bigger? Tommy asked himself. They both ran towards the entrance of the house. Suddenly a giant tentacle flew in front of Tommy and Sheila and stoped them dead on their tracks. The creature was inside the house. Sheila instinctivley grabbed the shotgun and cocked it..

[This message has been edited by spacemonkey (edited 08-17-2002).]

[FeydRautha]

"F*ck this sh*t! I'm gonna blow this thing away!" Sheila screamed in her panic as she cocked the rifle. Tommy tried to calm her down.

Just then, Sheila's father came down the stairs from the bedroom. "Sheila...is that you?" he asked, rubbing his eyes. "You've been out far too late, young lady!" He was stopped at the bottom of the stairs by a long tentacle and a mad glaring eye.

"Dad - get out of the way!!!" Sheila shrieked as she aimed the gun at the monster.

"Sheila - NO! Don't do it!!!" Tommy cried. "There's more of them out there!!!"

Sheila cocked the gun around and turned to see...

[Corpse Candle]

......a swarming bunch of deformed mutants pouring through a shatterd window.
"OH LORD..."
Shelia's father froze rooted to spot in desperate fear clenching the bannister to stedy himself.
BOOM
CLICK
BOOM
Shelia fired two powerfull shots from the shotgun.
A number of the mutants exploded from the impact of the gunfire a few of the creature stopped and begain devouring the splatterd inards of thier fellow invaders.
"Nice shooting shelia but thier coming from everwhere".
Tommy hid behind sheila cowering patheticly a shivering like a terryfied puppy.
Every window of the house was crawling with ill developed monsters oozing in thier numbers and undefined in hiearachy.
"Dad,tom you two head out back i'll hold em off until your safe"
Shelia orderd
"Darling sheli..."
"Move it dad"
An adamant shelia did not wish for her dads death not after mum went missing from town a year back and if her yellowback of a boyfriend wasn't gonna do anything she would.
Tommy and shelia's dad dissapered from her view into the dark recesses of the back garden safe for a moment.
The outrage beast roared again as it witnessed the death of a number of it's children now standing outside the house it plunged it's fist in the frontal brick work of the house.
TEaring down the outer wall it's siliva drenched theeth dripped in deathly anticipation.
Shelia whimperd at the sight of the gigantic terror growling a matter of meters from her face.
The elements erupted in violent rain and lightening to create a symphony of rage with the titanic horror.
It stepped closer rattling the foundations with each tiny akward step.
BOOM
CLICK
BOOM
Shelia fired her final shots but she may as well of been shooting a tank for the unstopable evil lung foward evermore.
Shelia's mind unraveled an emtional shut down was about to commence she tried to relive the good days before mum went but could find nothing fear had eaten her mind.
Just then there was a new noise not roaring not the battling weather but a more human familer and for some reason hopefull sound but what was it......

[malaria]

Erm, Corspe Candle. That was 48 lines long! lol

[spacemonkey]

She heard a familiar...sound. A familiar someone screaming..."Sheila! look out!"

It was Tommy. He came running out of the shadows towards her, as the creature kept making it way into the house.

Sheila snapped out of her fear, when she heard Tommy scream "Sheila! Run away!" as he jumped up in the air plunging himself towards the creatures giant eye.

With a wet sound, Tommy landed on the creature...forcing his left hand first into the creatures gigantic eye. Then forcefully inserting his right hand...causing the creature to give a loud squeal...like when they slaughter a pig. Red Thick Blood fell to the floor and splashed on Tommy. It was as if two hoses had been opened, blood was gushing all over the walls. Tommy reached deep into the creatures eye and tried to grab what ever he could, and rip it out.

Tommy knew he was harming it when he heard this loud squeal yet again....and when the creatures tentacles grabbed him by his arms and hurled him 10 feet across the room, falling on a little coffee table that was in the living room, smashing it to bits..

The creature was now blind...bleeding, and angry.. http://www.joblo.com/ubb/biggrin.gif

[Corpse Candle]

It lunged in what seemed to be it's death throw's griping tommy deeper and deeper into itself.
Wracked with pain it seemed to be ingesting tommys whole anatomy.
Musclue fiber tear,bones snapping crushed under the sheer wieght of the monsters brown flesh.
Soon only tommys traniers could be seen as he slid steadly in to the beast in a horizontal postion.
"TOMMMMEEEEEEEEEYYYYYYYY......."
Shelia yelled helplesly as she witnessed the unfolding horror of her boyfriend enveloped into the beast's torso.
The monster wailed with infinate torture bleeding from every orifice naturel ones and human made ones.
At that moment shelia saw something so mind numbling unnaturel her breath was stolen faces human faces were streaching the skin of monster as if they were living they were all cringing and yelling with pain pressing there tortured visages from the skin.
Shelia obbsed with her find looked closer one face seemed unbileavably familer a face from the past it was.
It was........

[spacemonkey]

The face started to stretch the monsters skin...the more the face streched the skin, the more familiar it became to sheila.
Little by little Sheila realized it was Tommy streching his way out from inside the monster. Sheila thought she heard give a muffled scream from inside the creature..."Grrrrgglll".

Soon Sheila saw a knife protruding the monsters skin...and Tommy was holding to it. "AAAARrrrrrgh! This is with out a doubt the grosest thing thats happened to me!" and he stood there drenched in the monsters blood...Sheila couldnt help but hug him, even if he was bathed in blood.

"Look Tommy! You did it! you killed it!"

"yeah but theres more of them outthere! What are we gonna do about THEM?"

"Heck if I know lets go see it we can go to the police station, maybe they can give us some explenation as to whats happening here." said Tommy.

"Lets go." And they both started their way out of what was left of Sheilas house. As the started their way down the street they could see people screaming and running...the little eye creatures obviously had been here.

But for some strange reason they were nowhere to be seen. "Where the hell did they go to?" asked Sheila looking around not seeing any of the creatures..

As they kept walking, they saw some people running towards them screaming their heads off, and obviusly running from something.
"Oh my god! Those creatures! Oh my god!"
said one man completely out of control..he was screaming.

"hold on man whats going on? What happened?"

"those creatures got into the cemetary! And Oh god! This cant be happening!" screamed the man, as he put his hands on his head.

"What! Whats happened man! Tell us!" Tommy held the man by his shoulders tryng to control his madness.

"Somehow those little eyeball things...oh god..theyve brought the dead back to life! Run for your life!" and then the man started running like a madman.

Tommy and Sheila looked at each other...then Sheila said "I have to go to that cemetary Tommy! My...my brother is buried there.."

[FeydRautha]

"No, Sheila, we'll be killed!" Tommy insisted. "Wait...I've got a better idea..."

They ran through the streets together, hand-in-hand, avoiding the occasional screaming and running individual. Sheila could think of nothing but her brother and dear departed mother, but let Tommy pull her along. Soon they arrived at the oldest house in town. Tommy rang the doorbell, then tapped his foot impatiently and knocked on the front door.

"Tommy - what are we doing here? We have to get to the cemetary!" Sheila whined.

"This is Professor Lang's house," Tommy explained, pressing the doorbell again. "He was my science tutor. He has a real thing for the occult. If anyone know's what's going on, and how to stop it, it'll be him."

Sheila started to protest, but was cut off when the door opened. A stately, elderly man stood before them, glaring, then recognised his old student. "Tommy! Thank God you're safe. Quick, come in - bring your little friend with you! There's much to be done..."

[spacemonkey]

"Whats happening here Dr. Lang? Do you know anything?" asked Tommy to his old science tutor.

"I fear that this has nothing to do with the supernatural Tommy. I fear that we owe a great lot of our troubles to prof. Stange and his reanimation experiments..." he said as he sat on his living room sofa...

"YOu mean that old crazy doctor who lives in the building around the corner? I allways thought he was a bit odd.." said Sheila.

"Yes he was odd, my dear. I was allways against his experiments. I think that what dies should remain dead..but he...he had other ideas.." Prof. Lang. said with a worried look on his face."He was conducting gross experiments with human eyes...trying to get a reaction from them... and by the looks of our streets today Id say he was successfull, but something Im afraid has gone seriously wrong..."

"Seriosly wrong is an understatement Prof. Lang! Those little eyeballs have somehow gotten to the corpses in Morningside Cemetary and they have also reanimated the dead...Prof. Lang what can we do?" asked Tommy.

"Well we need to make things right..and only one person can help us to find out how..Dr. Stange..I think we owe him a visit.."

[silverslash]

they slowly made their way through the distruction the running people had made there was even a dead baby barly a few weeks old with its head cracked open. shelia ran to a bush and spewed up. a few minutes later they were at dr stranges door step they knocked but no one seemed to be there so they opened the door and went in. there was broken bottles and test tubes leaking fluid onto the floor. 'what is going on DR STRANGE? DR STRANGE? where is he?' tommy asked 'where ever he is he would not like you dripping blood on the floor go and sit on that chair and wait.tommy sat down and looked to the groud 'OH JESUS CHRIST! DR LANG DR LANG!!! come here quick' they all came over looked at the floor and saw..