PDA

View Full Version : First Chapter of my compelling masterpiece of staggering genius part one


Dr. Lector
12-07-2002, 01:16 PM
Ulysses
K.T. Eisele

“Nel mezzo del cammin di nostra vita mi ritrorai per una selva oscura, che la diritta via era smarrita”- Dante’s Inferno

Chapter One:

The world is dark; it is an obscure shadow with no true beholder. It is dead. It has been beleaguered by an opaque coverlet, an ailing and poignant mantel, stretched over, engulfing the world. Under its acerbic grasp, pressing all light from it into the overpowering shadows. Yet here, bound between both eternities, I strain in vain to look beyond them.
I strain to look beyond both colossal peaks only to hear the void reverberation of my wailing cry. Merciless time and all of humans’ decree seems halted and yet I am still breathing. My heart still feels, still throbs and lacerates. But then why? Why then do the birds, these harbingers of good fortune, still chirp melodic tunes that diminish from the sounds of indistinct shooting, or the bawling cries of innocent civilians watching their whole life, all their past predicaments be shot away or thrown aside, amid the burning rubble? Why would the birds sing in such a wretched wasteland of hate and anguish, envy and jealousy? Whatever utopia of human virtue and bliss, whatever political goal or desire to control this once fertile green valley, has now invariably converted into a necropolis of the eternal savagery of human greed, an exhibit for me to witness my error. It was wrong to recruit, they did not want me. I say, “Down with the Uncle Sam stooge!”
I have been condemned to tread forth to my doom and hope that at the end of my destined route, a route governed by faith, dictated by choice and chance, my wife and child will greet me with open arms. To comfort the bitter tears that run down my bulbous, pink cheeks stained with the blood of other men. I have been condemned to walk forth into the melancholic heart of war, of eternity’s wrath, yet hopeful that the magnanimous soul of nature can pity this delirious wanderer. I have to hope that along this shrouded and dark path my feet are resolutely trudging, my goal can provide some sweet moral blossom so as not to serve as a darkling tale of human frailty and sorrow. This life I bear is but a sacred burden, a burden that I bear solemnly on my fragile shoulders. I have to stand and walk beneath it steadfastly for I shall fail not for woe, and fail not for sin, but onward and upward, until the goal I win.

* * * * * * *
The many desperate screams of helplessness still sound in the deserted battlefield. All that was once a pulchritudinous green meadow has converged with the dark touch of Apollyon’s wand and converted into a dreaded wasteland, a repulsion of every human virtue. As I gaze along the wretched soil, I see the many rivers of hell rolling down the blood saturated land, the Acheron, the Cocytus, the Phelegethon, and the Lethe. All of these, joined by the blood drenched river of human corruption, roll down and I find myself as a helpless ant midst the chaos of humanity. I am but a solitary island, destined to free myself of my spiritual redemption but trapped within the fell clutch of Apollyon’s sinister and misleading grasp. O but what an obstacle the rivers of sin and anguish are! What greater desire and objection looms beyond them than that of spiritual and familiar remorse. This is my atonement, my punishment, my martyrdom, directly from the indiscernible God. This is my penitence for sin and greed.
The sky up above, sketched and lined with tenebrous clouds cracks and releases, and it begins to rain. All of the infinitesimal raindrops come down from their home and drop onto this salvation of human dignity. They crash on the puddles of blood, on the blue and ivory faces of men, on the dark, brown soil. They drop on what was once life, circulating in all its glory and in serenity unable to be comprehended now that it has all been flushed away with the emotions of greed and anger and anguish and political dishonesty. These raindrops try to cleanse the earth of this appalling happening yet their power cannot match that of Apollyon. Uncle Sam has to witness the destructiveness of his finger.
Walking along the many corpses, the many pawns in a great big game of chess, something suddenly draws my attention to it. Lay down on the ground, his back blemished in a puddle of mud, there is a young man, his eyes open and gazing at the gray and forlorn skyline. He looks into the sky, he looks at the raindrops falling, yet he does not see all this. He is but a young boy, seduced into joining the war, to fight for a cause that he could not comprehend. All he was forced to know, all that he was allowed to know was one thing, “The Nazi’s are the enemy, Kill for your country!” This boy barely even knew the geography of Europe and yet was sent, along with millions of others into the trenches Germany, or in the beaches of France. Sent to fight thousands of miles from home, where their mom or dad, their friends and girlfriend love him. They sent him to fight with a heart half-torn. Now I look around me, I broaden my view and I see that all of these bodies, children, none older than 22. This was a “children’s crusade” another grim moment in history marked in the blood of innocent and futile children. This place is much worse than hell, it was Tartarus.
Someone once told me, his name of which I cannot recall, “Let’s plunge ourselves into the roar of time, the whirl of accident: may pain and pleasure, success and failure, shift as they will – it’s only action that can make a man.” All of these boys around me have taken action, they have killed and served their country, they have unleashed the fury of humanity and yet they are still nothing more than children. They are not men for what defines a man? These children all came here deluded that they will return home as men, ferocious beasts that will live on their farm life pleasantly and that the memories of war would not come back and haunt them. They will. When someone kills another man, whether they be the enemy, or whether they be an ally, that moment is etched in your mind, along with your first kiss, your first home-run or your graduation. They have all degraded themselves into scum, fighting for a cause they are unable and unwilling to understand. Just the seductive power of the gun and Uncle Sam’s finger was enough for them to unleash their vehemence and convert into violent beasts.
I bend over, my foot gradually sinking in the wet soil, and grope the cold steel of his dog tag just before I yank it from the chain around his pale blue neck. His name is Jake Singer. That’s all I need to know to conclude that he was human. I do not need to know his mom or dad, I do not need to know where he is from, I do not need to know anything else but his name for that is what identifies us. We are all known by the name we have been given, not by our properties and yet the man that killed this boy only knew one thing, “he’s the enemy, kill him!” Everybody, dead or alive in this wasteland only knew one thing about he person he killed, if he killed, that that person was the enemy. They were all deluded by some greater and overwhelming power. He was Jake Singer.
I am Robert Branson. He may be dead, he be no longer capable to look into the passionate eyes of his lover or the beautiful shoreline of Hawaii, but he still is and always will be Jake Singer. His white marble tombstone will be etched with that name and his mother and father will always know him by that name. Whether he was a father, I do not know, probably not but I will not jump to conclusions. He will always be Jake Singer, it is his identity, it is his barcode. Not the caption of enemy in the Nazi eye. We must all look beyond the captions and really try to focus on the person. It does not matter if the fact that we are actually going to kill a person like ourselves and cause a chain reaction of grief and exasperation that will make us break down and tremor like a coward, we must look. For then what are eyes and perception for? We must look at the man, and the innocence, at his youth and ask ourselves, “Is he really dangerous?” Somehow, we are always drawn to the gun in his hand, that abomination, and that triggers some entity in our mind. “Yes, yes he is.” We must omit this trigger, flush it away with our tears and live in a world of tranquility and commercial wealth. We must not be seduced by the atrocious finger of Uncle Sam.
We live in a world based on moralities, one that we strive to fit in to. We are all puzzle pieces trying to fit in the greatest and most complex puzzle of all, Life. There is no greater reason to do all this than rather the fear of not meaning anything, to be a no one in the world. All of us want to believe that the world will be much different if we had not been born when really, locked up in our subconscious, we know that the world would rotate just as fast, that the grass would grow just as slow. None of us want to accept the fact that alone, by ourselves, we are nothing more than pawns for no man is an island entire of itself. Only when we are together, working as a community based on the redemption of the rights in which we have founded this world and tried to live by can we make a difference and change the destined course of faith and life. Otherwise it is hopeless; otherwise it is just like trying to erode a rock with a feather at hand. We can not justifiably ignore the fact that we cannot stand alone but rather united, and as one. All of these boys lying down here in the mud, or in the blood drenched pools of rain, they worked together as a community, they stood up together as one to thwart the tyrant and yet what is their prize. Death.

Dr. Lector
12-07-2002, 01:17 PM
The world will not care about the death of Jake Singer, it will not bawl tears of sorrow and hate for this man alone. Maybe back at home, where his father is comforting the mother who believes that life will not go on anymore, maybe here he will be missed. Yet everywhere else, he won’t matter, his death will just be another grave to dig. Yet now here together, millions dead, this does matter and this does change things. This battle may well be on the front page of newspapers, on the radio, because of the fact that millions have died, and billions have suffered its terrible brunt. The price of death is one much more extravagant than what we believe. We cause much more chaos than what may be originally projected. We brink the river of sorrow every time we pump a bullet into the flesh of another man, or every time we thrust the cold blade of steel into his plump, red belly. We must be aware of the fact that death is a much greater subject. We must be aware that the person we kill is actually human, and this person that we kill has a family, has a mother and a father, a girlfriend and friends that love him very much. These people that we kill are no different from each and everyone of us and we have to be aware of this otherwise war is inevitable.
The inevitability of war in a society based on such extreme moralities is one that is grossly contradictory. We have outlawed murder, stealing, corruption and yet to abandon threats from other countries, to abandon free will, we use our own sins against them. We use the entities that we have been trying to defend against the enemy. Furthermore, we even have the nerve of promoting this on the walls of schools, we have the nerve of promoting the corruption of society on the youth, and we encourage the formation of an abomination of the moralities of society. Our community has contradicted its own ethics to fight against a tyrant who too is evading the ethical structure of its humanity. We are all sinners in a world based on ethics and moralities, one in which we have to follow the path of god and be good disciples of his teachings. We are invariably compelled to break, to diverge from our paths by the monolithic and subjugating corrupted and corruptive governments. We follow moralities that do not exist; we are all slaves to no greater purpose, slaves to an imperceptible cause.
Morals and ethics have deprived our society to breath. All around me are the repercussions of such actions and yet I do not feel remorse. Some hundred meters from me, it the faint obscurity of my vision I can see a herd of pigs, walking amongst the many corpses and at times pecking at the dead flesh trying to get a piece off. I look at all this and yet I see no difference between the humans lying on the ground, and the pigs. Whether you believe in evolutionism or creatism, we have been gifted with a superior mind, and we are able to base our actions, to study them and to guess their repercussions. All these people around me, even if they be just young boys, they had the ability to determine whether or not to fight. They knew that the possibilities of them returning to their loved ones were slim and yet then why recruit? What abominable propaganda could have enforced the corruption of such innocence? We have all been deluded in such a false utopia and now we have to face the music. This is the consequence, the death of so many innocent lives, seduced by the evil finger of Uncle Sam and the overwhelming power of propaganda. I look again at the framework of all this and am disgusted. It is just a gross absurdity the way that we have given ourselves like prostitutes to what we believe is a greater cause, one of which we are unable to comprehend. I gaze at the pigs and at the many corpses on the blood drenched soil and see no difference between the both. We have all degraded ourselves into pigs. My head tilts down, compelled by some greater and overpowering force and I spit on the ground. No difference will it make, all these men, they are just as low as the pigs and the fact that they justifiably ignored the evident aphorisms or their mistake has made their judgment and themselves just as vulgar as my spit. I say, “Down with the Uncle Sam stooge.”
This place is a dreaded wasteland. It is one of unspeakable horrors, both evident and enclosed within the framework of this massacre of innocence. This here is a vivid depiction of life as it is today, a world of innocence faced with apocalypse. We cannot escape the fell clutch of circumstance, we have to let it come as it may but what we can do is alter it or thwart it at most. Life will come, bludgeon in hand and beat you as hard as it may but we must all stand up strong, let the beating come and just think that somewhere, at the end of all this, there will be something much better installed for you. The corollary of such brutality is one of immense pleasure, except for all these lost souls around me, the bludgeoning was too much and they withered down like a flower in the vast sadness of the shadows. As for me, I know that this is my punishment and I know that somewhere something greater is waiting, I know that beyond the mordant martyrdom of life and war, the destruction of my ethics and self-beliefs, that something awaits, some treasure that will grant me spiritual redemption.
In the distance, somewhat obscured by the dark clouds, I can see the barren peak of Cold Mountain and I know that there my treasure lies. I know that my destined route ends on its peak and that I must walk, tread forth the narrow scroll and then march forth into the welcoming arms of my beloved. I must march forth into gratification. Before my shoe is swallowed by the mud, I pull it out and begin to walk. I begin to walk over all the corpses, trying not to distort the image that has now been engraved in my mind, one that will haunt my dreams and intensify my nightmares. When I reach the body line, when no longer do dead bodies decorate the earth, I look back into the horrors of war. I look back at the destruction of war. At what has been caused by guns and politics and yet for some reason I keep my gun. I question my future insecurity by keeping what I myself wish never existed. What a paradox life is! Then I turn around again and am drawn to the calling of Cold Mountain, “Robbie!”

I would really love to hear the opinion of all of you guys and tell me anything that you believe i should omit, alter, or things that i should add.

Mr. Orange
12-08-2002, 08:41 PM
A heartbreaking work of staggering genious?