FINALLY! I have a plot for my mindfuck script.

[Spider-man III]

The plot: Seven friends are camping, one suffers a very WEIRD accident and is taken to a hospital, when one of them (Not REALLY revealed which one) enters the hospital, it turns strange...

It has a coherent back-story that explains the hospital's shadowy past and why are all these ''events'' happening.
The ending IS surprice and mindfuck, this is by FAR the best script I have written to date, it is called "Flatline" (Those beeping heart monitoring thingees that go flat when you die).

Favor 1: Can you help me with a tagline?
Favor 2: What do you think?

[Boogeyman]

Well, I think the script has mucho potential. I like the aspect that its a strange hospital to them and its in the woods...etc. And the title is fitting. Possible taglines? There's the obvious, patients check in and dont check out. But I think you want something new....like, well, if I think of any intresting ones...Ill post them. But, if the script sounds as good as it does, I'd pay to see this.

later

[bobo_the_clown]

I really really like that idea. I am several scenes (scriptwise) into my mindfuck movie taking place at a school (like the one in silent Hill) and if your movie becomes more than a script I want in. Course thats your decision.

[DawnOfTheDead]

Sounds like it has a multitude of possibilities, man.

Possible taglines-

"Everything has a past"
"Something isn't right..."
"They're here to help you"

I'm totally willing to help in any way possible, that idea could go really far. Reply to this post or email me at brutalplanets@yahoo.com

Im really diggin' writing these taglines, could you be a tad more specific on the plot details? Cuz I can come up with alot more if I know more about the basic story line.

[heretic]

Sounds good, is the script finshed yet? if so can you send me a copy? Heretic_85@hotmail.com

possible tag line ideas, I'll have a go

"Why hello good doctor"
"the past always makes its way tot he present"

[JivaFox]

Same here, I'd love to read the script! :D


Send it over to gingersnapsbites@yahoo.co.uk

:D

[Spider-man III]

Oh God! great to see schmoes interested in this...as soon as the screenplay is copyrighted (:D), it'll go to all those mailboxes that want it. (Anyone who wants it, send me a PM and his/her E-Mail)

1. Someone mentones something about Silent Hill, I loved that! This script is based and inspired in Silent Hill a lot.
2. God, alll those Taglines are amazing! Special mentions:
0"the past always makes its way tot he present"
0"Something isn't right..."
0"patients check in and dont check out"

3. An specific plot:
000-7 characters are camping in the woods, one suffers an accident (Very strange accident, kind of like in Final Destination, a very elaborated accident) and must be taken to a hospital, when one of them (It's not revealed who until the end, you don't know WHO is the one who triggered the rotten past of the hospital and brought it, but he has a lot to do with it's shadowy past). When this person enters, all hell is broken loose and all the exits are covered, the hospital is now blood-stained, charred and rusted and Oh! it's also ran by pissed off phantoms...

I was inspired by Hose On Haunted Hill and Silent Hill...I'd love William Malone to direct this baby.