Create Your Own Final Destination Death Scene

[iDLEWiLD_fan]

what would u like to see as a death in a Final Destination movie.....plz wivout giving spoilers to the second film...not seen it yet that would b great :)

[*Escapade*]

OMG! I SOOOO was gonna start this topic!!!!!! I can't exactly think of a death scene I'd create myself, but I wanted to do this topic. Great idea!

[stevereno]

great fucking topic but im having writers block so i'll be creative later

SHIVER ME TIMBERS

[Luke-Abbott]

A young man, probably round the age of the usual horror casted teen (seventeen looking, maybe nineteen or somet like that). Let's call him Ashley, he looks an average build.

He's walking outside, its windy, he's wearing a big jacket to keep him warm. And a cap on his head to keep his head and ears warm, he's a man on a mission - probably off to a shop or something.

Ashey stops to check on his watch, then just like that a dark shadow looms over Ashley and quickly disapears, dissovles into nothing more like. Ashley doesn't notice a thing, suddenly the wind is picking up and growing stronger and stronger.

The wind then eventually picks Ashley up into the air, screaming his head off as he goes colliding into an oncoming truck just up ahead.

BANG!! His body is sent into the truck's face and bounches back up into the air, rolling round the truck's back and falling into the roof's of some cars right behind the truck. Glass and bent twisted metal is scattered everywhere as Ashley's almost lifeless body continues to hurdle into the frozen air. Ashley continues to break through the oncoming cars, honking and smashing.

Ashley is then sent into a car so hard that he breaks the roof away, tearing it apart. The wind then changes stride as it sends Ashley back hurddling to the torn away car and as he comes...

SLICE!! Part of a twisted up metal from the car slices his head clean off of his shoulders, Ashley's lifeless body is then sent crashing back down to earth. The wind calms down as all is silent around the carnage.

Hows that? Sorry if it's too long or anything, I guess I'm too creative when it comes to stuff like this.

[slasherfan]

MAn this is a good topic, I'll need to think about an answer first instead of jotting down the first thing that comes into my head (that's never good).

[Nightmare_Dreaming]

A dare devil, by the name of Blake decides to go sky diving.(Unaware the death is after him, of course.) He's on the plane and the guy is counting down untill Blake Jumps, "3,2,1..." Blake takes a leap of faith out of the plane. Hes soaring through the air without a trouble on his mind. (Yes, he's done this before.) He decides it's about time to pull his rip cord for a parachute. He pulls it, nothing comes out. He panics for a moment, and then pulls his emergency cord. A parachut floats out. "That was a close one." He thought. But as the parachut is coming out the cords on it wrap around his neck, he's being strangled. And also, the parachute has a hole in it. He's falling, unable to breath. Just as he's about to die of lack of oxygen his body splats on the ground, like a bug on a wind sheild.

Hows this?

[*Escapade*]

Originally posted by Nightmare_Dreaming
A dare devil, by the name of Blake decides to go sky diving.(Unaware the death is after him, of course.) He's on the plane and the guy is counting down untill Blake Jumps, "3,2,1..." Blake takes a leap of faith out of the plane. Hes soaring through the air without a trouble on his mind. (Yes, he's done this before.) He decides it's about time to pull his rip cord for a parachute. He pulls it, nothing comes out. He panics for a moment, and then pulls his emergency cord. A parachut floats out. "That was a close one." He thought. But as the parachut is coming out the cords on it wrap around his neck, he's being strangled. And also, the parachute has a hole in it. He's falling, unable to breath. Just as he's about to die of lack of oxygen his body splats on the ground, like a bug on a wind sheild.

Hows this?

WHOA!! MY name is Blake!!! Freaky....

[DWhots]

I would wake from a deep sleep, hit my alarm clock that has been soaked by a crack in my glass of water.
I would get out of bed, my feet just missing a black widow spider that surries passed.
I would walk down my stairs, missing the clutter on each step.
I would reach the kitchen and get some cereal, pour the out of date milk into my bowl and find that there are no spoons. So I pour out my cereal into the sink and make my way to the shower.
I step in and turn on the water. There is nothing. Then I think I hear someone at the door, so I step out of the shower just as a burst of steaming water blasts into the stall.
I dress and make my way out of the house.
Outside its a beautiful day. I breath in the air and bend my back backwards just missing a baseball that flies by.
And so I begin to walk down the street. I turn a corner, behind me a car slams into a lamp I just passed.
I cross the road, then I stop. Look down. And there before me is a shiny coin. I smile and pick it up. Oh lucky day, I think. As I get back up I pluck the coin into my pocket and continue on, narrowly missing a bus.
I get to the curb and climb up onto the sidewalk as workmen move giant beams into a work area. One of the beams falls and bounces off a moving car. The car hits it's breaks just before it smacks into a school bus. The school bus, empty thank god, begins to flip over and over again. It lands on a police officer who is staked out in front of a bank hold-up, his shot gun goes off.
A spary of hot metal slugs fly up into the air. It hits a gull.
The bird comes tumbling down and fall into the lap of a rather large woman. She goes into panic mode and tears off down the street sceaming at the top of her lungs.
Meanwhile, I walk into a McDonalds and order a breakfast. I sit down and take a bite. BHAM!!!! I die.

After all, that shit will kill ya.

[someguy]

Here goes...

A woman namesd Maria is in her kitchen pouring a glass of water. She spills some on the ground. She decides to clean it up after she goes upstairs. She goes upstairs,things cluttered on the floor. She kicks something. It slides over to a pole which falls down,hits a knife which flies into the air and drops on Maria. She dodges it. She then goes downstairs and grabs her glass of water. She hears a noise outside,walking backwards to the kitchen. She then slips on the water stain,falling down on the ground face-up. The glass flies in the air,on the ceiling,shatters,and all the glass from the cup fall on her.

[Elgyn]

This is not a very complicated "chain-of-events" type of death, but how about a gun accidentally going off? Like the scene in "Pulp Fiction"?

Like for example, a cop thinks he hears something and walks around a room with his gun drawn. Finding no one in the room, he sets his gun on a table and sits down in a chair, relieved. All of a sudden, BANG, the gun goes off and blows his head off.

[iDLEWiLD_fan]

Originally posted by someguy
Here goes...

A woman namesd Maria is in her kitchen pouring a glass of water. She spills some on the ground. She decides to clean it up after she goes upstairs. She goes upstairs,things cluttered on the floor. She kicks something. It slides over to a pole which falls down,hits a knife which flies into the air and drops on Maria. She dodges it. She then goes downstairs and grabs her glass of water. She hears a noise outside,walking backwards to the kitchen. She then slips on the water stain,falling down on the ground face-up. The glass flies in the air,on the ceiling,shatters,and all the glass from the cup fall on her.

i really like this one.....i could almost see it in a final destination movie...reminds a bit of miss. lewton.....great death.........actually there are all great!! but this one in particular

[someguy]

I have another.

Two people are driving down the road when the driver notices an animal on the road. She dodges the animal,but goes out of control,spinning wildly. They're about to crash into a truck when the car stops. They go on their merry way. When they get to where they were going(a mall)the passenger opens the door and steps out. When the passanger does step out,a car runs into him taking him and the door away.

Oh yeah,thanks for saying my death is great.

[someguy]

Yet another.

A guy,let's say Jim is walking on a bridge over a freeway. He's walking on the sidewalk when a pickup truck with scrap metal is driving by. He ignores it,eating his burger. A piece of metal flies off of the truck,goes toward Jim and slices off his head. His head falls off the bridge onto the hood of a car on the freeway. A woman driving the car screams,goes out of control and her car starts flipping. The woman's car flips on the top of another,crushing the people inside. Jim's burger also flew out of his hand and off the bridge. It landed on another car. The guy in the car slams on his brakes. The car behind him was going fast and had no time to react when he noticed the car in front of him wasn't moving. His car slammed into the other. The guy flew out of the windsheild(no seatbelt on)and slammed his face into the back of the car in front of him.

[screamtrilogy1]

Julie come in the big evelator with her marchandise. She close the first big gate en after she close the security panel. She press the down button. The elevator start to get down but it stop. Julie try to press the button again.
Julie-
Shit what's going on.
She reach the emergency phone but the line is not working.
Julie-
Nothing is fucking working here!
Julie open the security panel and see that she can reach the floor.
Julie-
I have no choice.
Julie reach the gate and start to open it.
Julie-
Come on.
The gate does not want open at the maximum so Julie try to get herself in the little opening.
Julie-
I'm gonna kill myself i'm sure.
Julie get herself in the opening but she realise that it's too small for her whole body.
Julie-
I knew i was to get myself killed.
She try to get out but she's stuck.
Julie-
Fuck.
The security panel fall on her leg and she scream in pain.
Julie-
Help me somebody please!
She hear a strange elevator noise.
Julie-
Shit no!
The elevator start to get up.
Julie-
Help me!
The elevator than stop at the floor where Julie is stuck so she just have to finally open the gate and get out.
Julie-
What a miracle.
The elevator start to get up again.
Julie-
No!
Her leg are going up with the elevator and she try to get out of the gate.
Julie-
Help me!
Her leg are squashed in the air and all of her body start to get squashed.
Julie-
No!
Than the elevator stop.
Julie-
I can't feel my body.
She hear and other noise.
Julie-
What was that.
She hear a big steel noise and than the elevator start falling down.
Julie-
No!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Her legs are squashed down and the rest of her body is getting split up by the gate. Blood start running down her mouth. The elevator stop and than start coming up again. Julie is cutted in two parts this time. Her legs stay in the elevator and the top of her body than fall off the gate and crash the floor of the level. All of her inside is lying on the floor with her.

[T.J. fallon]

Here's mine

A young couple, lets say they're names r Mike and Jessica are walking down the street on a seemingly normal day on the other side of the street is a construction site, in that there's a crane with a high beam attached to it's hoisting wire raising the beam up, as Mike and Jessica are walking Mike notices the man opperating the crane quickly stare at Jessica with a perverted expression so Mike gives him the finger, pissed off by this the construction worker turns to yell fuck you to Mike as he does this he accidentally hits a lever hard causing the crane and the highbeam to violently swing towards Mike and Jessica, in shock micheal quickly pushes Jessica out of the way but before he can get of the way the highbeam slams into him instantly cutting him inhalf splattering blood and gore every were his legs still standing with bloody parts from his upper body scattered on the ground and the walls on the buildings behind. As Jessica screams in total shock the high beam swings back towards her, the wires holding the beam snap throwing the highbeam into her smashing and crushing her onto the pavement a pool of blood then forms around her mangled body.

[T.J. fallon]

damn! double posted sorry bout that

[rikimaru187]

My personal death scene for Final Destination would be this. When I woke up one morning and realized I was in such a shitty film, both 1 & 2. I'd walk right outside and shoot myself in the fucking head. Sorry to be negative but I'm a fan of the old school shit, you know hockey masks, knived gloves, butcher knives and boogeymen. Sorry...

[iDLEWiLD_fan]

Originally posted by rikimaru187
My personal death scene for Final Destination would be this. When I woke up one morning and realized I was in such a shitty film, both 1 & 2. I'd walk right outside and shoot myself in the fucking head. Sorry to be negative but I'm a fan of the old school shit, you know hockey masks, knived gloves, butcher knives and boogeymen. Sorry...

if you like old school then wot was the point in posting in this topic :confused:

[rikimaru187]

Didn't mean to bring you down man. I enjoyed the original Final Destination immensely. The second one just didn't impress me all that much. No hard feelings.:D

[theJeeper]

There is this girl
She is walking down the streed
Its a kind of rainy day
She stops to tie her shoe
Looks down into a puddle and sees a shadow
Looks back nothings there
As soo as she turns her head a bird flys into her face.
Which then causes her to jump into the street
As soon as she does that... BOOM she gets hit by one of those huge trucks.

[The1stWeinerDog]

My Death Scene:

A young man is getting rady for a date. He is standing in his bathroom doing his hair. He remembers he forgot to take his medication. He opens his medicine cabinet. Pulls out the medicine container and opens the top and poors 2 pills into the palm of his hand. The man puts the container away, fills a glass with water. He sets the glass down and shuts the medicine cabinet door. As the door shuts the mirror displays the smokey showdy death cloud. He looks the other way getting starled and swings his arm and knocks over the glass of water. The cloud is gone. no realizing that the water is spilled he pops the pills in his mouth. He takes a step to turn around and reach for the water: in doing so he slips on the water that was intvertinly spilt on the bathroom tile. He falls hard to the ground. The pills get lodged in his throught. The boy gasps for air. He stubles his way into his bedroom that is conjoined off of the bathroom. He is able to perform the hymlic on himself using a chiar top. The pills are dislodged from his throught. The water from the sink was left unattended. The doorbell rings. The young man goes to check. there is no one there. By this time the water from the sink has over flowed into his bedroom soaking a large portion of his carpet. The boy walks back into his room, he notices the carpet is wet. The bed room is not well lit with light. He turns on a lamp near the contaminated carpet. The light buble sparks and blows out. He accidentaly knoks over the lamp while the current is stioll running. The lamp comes into contact with the water the boy again is narrowly able to dogde out of the way of electricution. But in doing so he sends himself into the glass door shattering it to peices. There are a few peices of sharp glass still hanging on by a thread at the top of the door. The boy turns over and kocks the fram of the door, unlodging the glass and driving a large peice of glass into his mouth trough his trought decapitating his head in half.

[Outlaw_x]

I would totally want to take a piss neat a high electric generator then some how slip and get electrocuted... actually that’s not deaths kills its my stupidity

[Outlaw_x]

My very own Final Destination Death Scene.
My Death Scene:

A young man is getting rady for a date. He is standing in his bathroom doing his hair. He remembers he forgot to take his medication. He opens his medicine cabinet. Pulls out the medicine container and opens the top and poors 2 pills into the palm of his hand. The man puts the container away, fills a glass with water. He sets the glass down and shuts the medicine cabinet door. As the door shuts the mirror displays the smokey showdy death cloud. He looks the other way getting starled and swings his arm and knocks over the glass of water. The cloud is gone. no realizing that the water is spilled he pops the pills in his mouth. He takes a step to turn around and reach for the water: in doing so he slips on the water that was intvertinly spilt on the bathroom tile. He falls hard to the ground. The pills get lodged in his throught. The boy gasps for air. He stubles his way into his bedroom that is conjoined off of the bathroom. He is able to perform the hymlic on himself using a chiar top. The pills are dislodged from his throught. The water from the sink was left unattended. The doorbell rings. The young man goes to check. there is no one there. By this time the water from the sink has over flowed into his bedroom soaking a large portion of his carpet. The boy walks back into his room, he notices the carpet is wet. The bed room is not well lit with light. He turns on a lamp near the contaminated carpet. The light buble sparks and blows out. He accidentaly knoks over the lamp while the current is stioll running. The lamp comes into contact with the water the boy again is narrowly able to dogde out of the way of electricution. But in doing so he sends himself into the glass door shattering it to peices. There are a few peices of sharp glass still hanging on by a thread at the top of the door. The boy turns over and kocks the fram of the door, unlodging the glass and driving a large peice of glass into his mouth trough his trought decapitating his head in half.

hasnt that been done for a millionth time

[TheJadedGamer]

This is pretty awesome! I can use some of the deaths I used in my crappy horror movie script. Well, here we go....


A kid is taking a piss in his bathroom after drinking heavily. He accidently pisses on the floor, and goes to walk off. He slips on the urine, smashing his head on the counter. He is bleeding heavily, and tries to grabs for the counter yet again. He misses, too drunk, and falls again, this time just landing outside of the bathroom. He is able to stand up, and starts to head downstairs to wash his wound. (Dumbass didn't call 911) Piss still on his foot, he tumbles down the stairs, falling on the rail, head first. He is able to grab onto the rail, but he is still falling. He hits the banster-thingy (what ever it is call), which happens to be in the shape of a spike. He knocks it off, then falls down the last stair, impailing himself as the death cloud fades out.

[FilmBuff84]

One that I have thought up:

A girl, we'll call her Clare, is driving out of her office building parking lot. She gets to the exit and puts a special work card in a machine which lifts and lowers a beam to let the cars in and out. The beam doesn't rise at first and the card is stuck halfway in the slot. She then tries pulling on the card to no result. She gets out of the car and walks up to the beam to try and push it up, we see it slightly move, but ultimately it stays jammed. All of a sudden the beam rises and narrowly misses Clare. She walks back to her car and gets in and starts to drive, however the beam crashes down and slams into her car just missing her. The beam crashes down into her car and sits just infront of her just over her waist. She screams in shock and stops the car. The way the beam has crashed down has busted the car door from opening so she starts to climb out through the sunroof. At this point we see a large truck carrying panels of glass driving up from the bottom level car park. As Clare carefully climbs out of the car, we see the beam struggle once again as she thinks it may rise so she starts to clim out quicker. All of a sudden the beam rises and once again narrowly misses her. The truck carrying the glass panes is almost behind her and puts on the brakes suddenly when he sees her car sitting there, this sudden hault of the car makes an already loose pane of glass slip and shoot out, the glass shatters on some metal rods from the truck and several of the sharp panes fly out and slice Clare. One through the top of her head, just abover her eyes, the other through her neck and one into her back through her chest. Her body sits there and then slumps down onto the car with the top part of her head sliding off and sliding down the front of her car.

[X-Nightcrawler]

Originally posted by Outlaw_x
My very own Final Destination Death Scene.

hasnt that been done for a millionth time come ON! a decap?? it HAS been done a thousand times but thios one was extremly cool that could make a really tense scene. The1stWeinerDog: I really dug your decap scene.

[X-Nightcrawler]

A freaky one becuase, something like this happened to me.


A guy is walking around in the kitchen, he hears to phone ring and goes to pick it up...When he is talking on the phone, he feels death's wind, but every window is closed. Suddenly, a window bursts open and drops a plastic glass to the floor it rolls, he doesn't notice. done. He hangs up. He walks to the kitchen and trips on the rolling glass, falls back and hits the back of his head wiht the corner of the table, killing him.

[TheJadedGamer]

Another crappy one:


A guy is sitting underneath a ceiling fan, slicing an apple and then eating it. He goes to throw the apple carcus away, leaving the knife sitting on the table. The ceiling fan then jerks wildly, and a few bolt falls from the fan. The guy goes back to sit down, unknowning that the bolt are missing. The ceiling fan then breaks off, and in one quick motion: slices the dude's arm (not off), hits the table, making the table fling into the guy's forehead. Death.

[TATU]

A man is walking through a church whistling "When The Saints Come Marching In" as he walks underneath a giant cross it wiggles and then falls just missing him. As the guy spins around he nocks over a bowl of holy water. As he turns around he smacks his head on the cross. The force snaps his neck. Dead....