Giallo Script opening.

[DWhots]

This was an opening of a giallo I was trying to work on called Hair on the Golden Blade.

check it out and tell me what you think.

cheers

[DWhots]

Oops, forgot to post it.

[DWhots]

really needing some feedback. Please give a guy a hand

[Jason13thh]

Sorry I don't have the time to read it but the slasher/giallo genre is favorite subgenre so it is kind of stupid to say that but .... any giallo script is good.
Good luck with ur script !

[X-Nightcrawler]

I like it!! The scene's end is UBER neat...but...was Emily killed?

[TheJadedGamer]

Nice detail of sceneary, man. I like it! So, what happens to Emily?

[DWhots]

I am glad you liked it. I had two versions of the story, one in which Emily lives to go on and solve the murders that involved only young blonde woman. In another she is killed right there in a very messy way and a cop has kills the killer and the story moves on five years later where there are copycat killings and it is up to the cop, now ex-cop suffering from bad dreams from his past.