your own lyrics

[skaaddict3303]

who here likes writing lyrics? you should post them. i mean i write them once in a while, and nce in a while i like to show my embarrassing creations to others. bye.


i wonder why i cannot see
and why i'm hanging from this tree
you sit and wonder
stare and cry
i killed myself
but didn't die
you helped me up and then i fell
you put me though a living hell
i always wonder why i'm dead
but then again your eyes were red
and all of lives events are out of order when your lonely life is borderline but keep in mind that truth will come with some past time and
i can tell your never scared
the bravest i've ever dared
for you to do is try to cry
then refused and tried to lie
to me but that doesnt make you right
you sit up nights and try to fight
then pain that would ease all your sorrows
you ended up with no tomorow
just try not to end like i did




just imagine that its not terrible and its a masterpiece!!!!:)

[John Dark]

Originally posted by skaaddict3303
just imagine that its not terrible and its a masterpiece!!!!:)

I'd say it's somewhere in between.

[skaaddict3303]

haaaa
come on guys, post your lyrics so i don't look like a loser!!!!:)

[Shakamaker]

We can't have that, dude! I'll loser-up this thread, real good like fer ya! Like, take you away from the heat! I call this one, 'Stay off the pills, for fuck's sake'.

Grey skies and aligators, when will they get along?
Harpo Marx and grandmother, the spilling of the bong.
Victory to Power Rangers, them Turtles and the like,
A brilliant way to pass the day, is kickin' on the mike!

Everybody!

(Chorus)
Give peace a chance
With the exception of France
Mumma, take these pills away,
I've had more than my share today.

Repeat to fade.

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I think there's something in that for all of us.

[Grebdron]

Originally posted by Shakamaker
We can't have that, dude! I'll loser-up this thread, real good like fer ya! Like, take you away from the heat! I call this one, 'Stay off the pills, for fuck's sake'.

Grey skies and aligators, when will they get along?
Harpo Marx and grandmother, the spilling of the bong.
Victory to Power Rangers, them Turtles and the like,
A brilliant way to pass the day, is kickin' on the mike!

Everybody!

(Chorus)
Give peace a chance
With the exception of France
Mumma, take these pills away,
I've had more than my share today.

Repeat to fade.

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I think there's something in that for all of us.

I actually like that, Shaka.

Write more.

[skaaddict3303]

aww thank you! that was very good actually

[ofmknockoff]

Sorry, I trust you guys and everything but none of my stuff is copywrited and with my band recording our single right now, maybe it isn't such a good idea.



















Or maybe I don't like my lyrics and don't want anyone else to see my work until I improve more.

[notchreturns]

This is off the top of my head, honestly, so forgive if it's totally BS... especially you, sir Dark. I guess it supposed to be played in a Simon and Garfunkel tone... don't quote me on that.

Monday morning, not exactly my fave, an angry24 for everyone, even worse for me
Drama in the sky, temptaion on the ground, a deep stabbing pain in my chest
Kinda like a naked woman, leaving my bedroom, calling me "Mr. limp dick with with nothing to give."

Mornings seem so much better, on these cold, cold days
When the sky is dreary and my tounge is bitter
On these cold, cold days
I feel my soul, I free my mind, I dream of the happy side
On these cold, cold days

That damn walk down the hall, to find no one there, an evening of despair, and I'm just gonna do it again.
Fuck this shit, dawg, I ain't living like that, give me a 40 ounce and a weekend by myself, I'll be all good again!

Mornings seem so much better, on these cold, cold days
When the sky is dreary and my tounge is bitter
On these cold, cold days
I feel my soul, I free my mind, I dream of the happy side
On these cold, cold days


Wow... did I just make an ass of myself or what?! Awwww, fuck it, I've been here to long to care what anyone thinks about me anymore. And hey... I think it's catchy!


:D

[Kim_EZ]

I actually write lyrics a lot. Sometimes for a guy who's in a band I used to talk to (before I went off to college). Then, I make up English lyrics for Japanese/Korean songs (just to sing along to, and for others).

This is something I wrote recently. It's based on the idea of how someone finds it too difficult to leave a (bad) relationship.

"Foolish"

I'm just sitting around
Waiting for the truth to be found
And you're telling me
That you might not come home
And I feel so alone

I wanna move on
I wanna get out of here
Every time I pack my things
I stay 'cuz of fear

Maybe I'm just foolish
Maybe I'm just crazy
But I know just one thing
You leave me oh so speechless

* I used to be the one you breathe
Every time you wake up
I'm the one you'd see
Oh don't say good night
Let's call this goodbye
You were my every little thing

Some say I'm so infatuated
Would they rather me sit around
Acting so jaded
I'm kinda crazy when it comes to you
Okay I'll admit it
It's just the truth

Maybe I'm just foolish
Maybe I'm just crazy
But I know just one thing
You leave me oh so speechless

Repeat *

Bridge:
I just wanna walk out that door
I'm tired of crying
These tears no more

Repeat *

Yeah, I'm just foolish
But leaving you is my one wish.

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