View Full Version : Friday the 13th Part XI Fan Script
TheJadedGamer
08-20-2003, 10:41 PM
This is my new script project that I'm working on. Since I sat down and thought 'Well, there is no fucking link from ANY of the Jason movies past VI and to X, why don't I write one?' So I did. This is the beginning of my Friday the 13th Part XI script.
XCoRyX
08-21-2003, 04:35 AM
didnt take a reading to your script...yet...but good luck man....i have my own idea for a F13 sequel,but am holding off on working on it,as there is no too big of a chance of anything happening with it...i'm working on original scripts first.
Jason Vorhees
08-21-2003, 04:41 AM
sounds cool. but i highly doubt the motion picture association of america would allow you to say i'm cumming.. i'm not sure though
XCoRyX
08-21-2003, 04:50 AM
can you some up the plot for this fan script of yours,I can't download your file,too tired and comps running slow.
Luke-Abbott
08-21-2003, 08:34 AM
LOL true Friday the 13th style :D Good luck on completing this fan script of yours, thats what I love about people doing fan scripts. Expressing their love for the characters they respect in their favourite horror movie or any movie for that matter. Good luck on writing it :)
Inglorious
08-21-2003, 12:12 PM
Cool. I suppose that that's somewhat how something would go in a Friday The 13th. Did you purposely spell Jason Voorhees wrong? Or was it a mistake? Just wondering. Pretty good though... a 1rst time in a cemetary. :( Reminds me of A Chorus Line without the drama, and substitute for killing. :D
PhantomOfTheParadise
08-21-2003, 04:35 PM
Totally off topic but it's funny you mention A Chorus Line - I'm currently working on a local production of the show and many time I've worked concepts in my head of someone killing the other auditioners....:D
TheJadedGamer
08-21-2003, 05:42 PM
Originally posted by Jason Vorhees
sounds cool. but i highly doubt the motion picture association of america would allow you to say i'm cumming.. i'm not sure though
American Pie got to say cumming.....
Tara Reid (Getting ate out): 'I'm cumming! I'm cumming!'
Oh, and Penut, I DID spell Jason VOORHEES wrong, thanks for noticing it, and thanks for all the response.
TheJadedGamer
08-21-2003, 05:52 PM
Originally posted by XCoRyX
can you some up the plot for this fan script of yours,I can't download your file,too tired and comps running slow.
Alright, it goes like this:
This is not actually a true sequel, but more of a prequel, connecting the events of Friday the 13th Parts 4, 5, 6, and Jason X. Yes, I'm totally leaving out parts 7, 8, and Goes to Hell, but there will be some refrences.
To sum it up, it goes like this:
Tommy Jarvis, now around 34-35, somewhere in that age area (bare with me here) now has a son thanks to the girl from part 6 ( I can't remember her damn name, anyone who tells me, It'd be welcomed.) named Jimi Jarvis, who is sixteen.
Camp Crystal Lake has been turned into a 'housing development' project for a greedy relator. Since it has been almost 10-15 years since the last time Jason was 'alive', the residents of Crystal Lake now don't remember Jason Voorhees, or Pamela Voorhees, anymore, and their fear is gone.
Jason isn't happy with this. He is awoke by two people having sex in a graveyard, and he starts his killing spree all over again, taking out people one by one. (And, when he awakes, he doesn't have his trademark mask, which he doesn't find until about 15-20 minutes into the movie, when he slaughters some hockey players).
Ally Rowan (the girl from Jason X, I don't know if she had a last name, but I gave her one) is about seventeen at this point, before the Camp Crystal Lake Research Facility is opened. (But, it is there, the last moments of the movie take place in the Facility) Rowan still believes that Jason Voorhees is alive, since she has been living at Crystal Lake since she was born. (Which is in early part 6 in which she was born)
Bodies pile up, Tommy and Jimi get to the houses, try to save the occupants of the houses (has Jason ever killed old folks!?), and destroy Jason once and for all.
I know this is pretty confusing, but take it like this: It fills the gap that Jason X left the series with. This is BEFORE Jason X, so it bears the question: What did Jason do before he was captured?
XCoRyX
08-21-2003, 07:05 PM
My Fan script actually was similiar in the tone of having Rowan in it,and filling in the void and gap to explain what happened before Jason X and how he got in the facility.....if you people were to want to know my plot version i'd tell yous but I don't feel like typing it up for lost cause....
TheJadedGamer
08-21-2003, 07:11 PM
Originally posted by XCoRyX
My Fan script actually was similiar in the tone of having Rowan in it,and filling in the void and gap to explain what happened before Jason X and how he got in the facility.....if you people were to want to know my plot version i'd tell yous but I don't feel like typing it up for lost cause....
I'd like to hear your basis for the fan script!
XCoRyX
08-21-2003, 07:23 PM
why thanks...if you do insist ;)
By Popular Demand (lol)-
I was toying with the idea of throwing Tommy Jarvis in the mix,but in reality,New Line doesn't have the rights to his character...so rather then make them pay cash,I played asshole and ignore him for now.
In this film, Rowan (Lexa Doig),works for an underground group of believers that Jason still exists,they are underground because the goverment and town have long since banished the legendary Jason Voorhees from their vacation guides.
During a snowstorm in the town where Crystal Lake lies,a series of grisly deaths occur.Rowan and her other team members start to investigate and get involved,even with the press.Meanwhile cops and the mayor of Crystal Lake are trying to shut Rowan and the others mouth....Crystal Lake has long since become a beautiful town,with beautiful people,so why spoil the love?
The head honcho boss of Rowans team shes affiliated with,Dr. Wimmer (David Cronenberg) sells out and joins with the mayor and such,and gets a crap load of money to shut his mouth and thus help them.
So now,throw in many helpless teens,cops,the mayor,and the members of the underground team of voorhees believers and researchers,and one hell of a snowstorm,you got yourself the next Friday The 13th.
TheJadedGamer
08-21-2003, 09:28 PM
That sound like a cool script, XCoRyX. I know that Tommy Jarvis isn't a property of New Line (damn you Paramount fuckheads!! :D ), but I really want closer in his character.
Inglorious
08-21-2003, 09:36 PM
I usually don't say it like this... but both of those ideas are kick-ass! I have never even thought of half those ideas. I think I've been inspired to write a script about F13 now by you two. Very cool script ideas though guys!
killuminati003
08-21-2003, 10:19 PM
Originally posted by Penut
I think I've been inspired to write a script about F13 now by you two. Very cool script ideas though guys!
ya me to......but i doubt mine would be any where close to as good as those two.....those ideals both r awsome...
TheJadedGamer
08-21-2003, 10:40 PM
Originally posted by killuminati003
ya me to......but i doubt mine would be any where close to as good as those two.....those ideals both r awsome...
Don't doubt yourself.
XCoRyX
08-22-2003, 03:23 AM
thanks for the kind words...and yeah,like he said,dont EVER fucking doubt yourself...your a joblo schmoe,and live in schmoeville with the rest of us...
TheJadedGamer
08-23-2003, 02:27 PM
Having trouble trying to introduce my characters. After the scene that I posted here, it goes on to Tommy and Jimi in their car, disgussing what they are doing at Crystal Lake (even though Jimi doesn't find that out), and also reintroduces the masks that Tommy mades in parts 4 and 5. From there, it goes on to introduce Johan Blake, the greedy relastate guy, and Steve, a construction worker, as they talk about the murder. Then I go into the five teenagers living at Crystal Lake: Riley Aliak (the fat guy, who thinks he is all that), Tia Ward (Riley's bitchy girlfriend), the two lesbian characters (Denna Laggly and Ellen Detmar), and finally Rowan.
After all of this, it turns night, and Jason walks into a game of teens playing...hockey. He murders them all, and steals a goalie mask, thus giving him his 'new' mask.
I SWEART TO GOD TJD, if you finish this script of your's, you better send it to me via e-mail or something.
TheJadedGamer
08-23-2003, 07:06 PM
Originally posted by Jason_fan 1
I SWEART TO GOD TJD, if you finish this script of your's, you better send it to me via e-mail or something.
I'll do that, and I'll also be posting the script on this thread. I'm not going to rush with this script (Jason X only took three weeks to write), I'm taking my time for once. Right now, I only have the first 15 minutes wrote (I'm aiming for the 90-95 minute mark).
XCoRyX
08-23-2003, 08:37 PM
yeah take your time man...you and the few who dug my idea have made me want to immediately begin working on my script of what should be the next F13 sequel :)
TheJadedGamer
08-23-2003, 11:40 PM
Originally posted by XCoRyX
yeah take your time man...you and the few who dug my idea have made me want to immediately begin working on my script of what should be the next F13 sequel :)
I think your script idea is a breath of fresh air, man. You should really start working on it.
TheJadedGamer
08-24-2003, 10:11 PM
Just finished what I think is going to be the best part of my script: The Hockey Massacre!
It goes like this:
Some kids are playing hockey on a blacktop outside of the lake area. There, Jason kills the one of the players when they leave to use the shitter, and takes his hockey stick as a weapon. He then enters the blacktop, and one of the other players start to make fun of ole Jason. That's with Jason impales the fucker with the hockey stick. The others freak out, and Jason kills them. In a death of a couple of the hockey players, Jason pushes the goal across the blacktop, and it is shoved so hard that the strings on the goal slice through a couple of the players. It is a very bloody scene. After all of them are killed, the only one left is the goalie. He hands Jason his old fashioned goalie mask "Take it!" the goalie says as he dashes off. As the goalie makes a run for it, the hockey stick flies through the screen, slicing the goalie in half!
you sick bastard.........i like it
XCoRyX
08-25-2003, 06:17 AM
Originally posted by TheJadedGamer
I think your script idea is a breath of fresh air, man. You should really start working on it.
Thanks,I think I just may soon enough...after I finish my current plot outline work.
TheJadedGamer
08-25-2003, 07:01 PM
Changes:
--All of the teen characters' names have been changed.
--The introduction of Eddie, the old man. He is a psycho, and warns everyone that they are going to die, and why. "You lesbians are going to die a horrible death! Eating each other out and such!"
XCoRyX
08-25-2003, 10:21 PM
i gotta get started on my original script but want to get down and to business with this one too...
TheJadedGamer
08-25-2003, 10:29 PM
Originally posted by XCoRyX
i gotta get started on my original script but want to get down and to business with this one too...
Why not? Do it!!
I'm right after the hockey scene now, where Tommy explains Jason to his son. It also involves a little Trevor Moorhoose (or however you say it, I don't want to watch that movie again!)
TheJadedGamer
08-27-2003, 05:52 PM
BUMP!
actually, one time i was gonna write a script but then i ended up not doing it. see, i'm more of a "see the movie" type. I actually just got writer's block and haven't been able to continue. GOOOOD writer's block suck donkey cock
XCoRyX
08-27-2003, 10:41 PM
Originally posted by TheJadedGamer
Why not? Do it!!
I'm right after the hockey scene now, where Tommy explains Jason to his son. It also involves a little Trevor Moorhoose (or however you say it, I don't want to watch that movie again!)
when it comes to actually writing,I like focusing 110 percent on 1 project and that 1 project right now is my gem :)
and jaded,call me nervous but do you expect these ideas to be stolen eventually?
TheJadedGamer
08-27-2003, 10:51 PM
Don't know, but you make a good point.
Anyway, I'm rewriting what I got now, so I can the script longer.
Also:
Death Scenes (Changed Some Character Names)
Lynda: Screwdriver in the head.
Mel: Beheaded by car door.
Hockey Players: Head bash, stabbed, cut into pieces, and cut in half.
Rowan's Mother: Hung by knife on a door.
Amy: Throat slit.
Keegan: Bed squash. (Jason is underneath a bed. He then raises up, grabbing the bed and pressing it again the ceiling. Blood gushes everywhere)
Rachel: Head bashed in, then it is cut off.
Ken: Sliced in half vertically.
And some surprising death scenes that I won't reveal.
XCoRyX
08-27-2003, 11:02 PM
haha jaded,GEE i wonder who keegan is named after.
TheJadedGamer
08-28-2003, 09:34 PM
Originally posted by XCoRyX
haha jaded,GEE i wonder who keegan is named after.
OH yeah. I'm renaming Amy to Andrea, (which I think is A.J. Cook's first name).
XCoRyX
08-28-2003, 09:46 PM
rock on..
TheJadedGamer
08-28-2003, 09:54 PM
Oh yes! There WILL be a lesbian scene........
XCoRyX
08-28-2003, 09:58 PM
rock on again
TheJadedGamer
08-28-2003, 10:04 PM
And LOADS of TNA. People will flock to see it.
XCoRyX
08-28-2003, 10:06 PM
I would hope so as a fellow F13 fan,cause i'd want my sequel used eventually too...:(:( wheres the love.
Inglorious
08-28-2003, 10:09 PM
I love these ideas TJG and Corey! They're great! Don't blow me away for this... but what do us guys see in lesbian action? Hmmm, I never got it...
TheJadedGamer
08-28-2003, 10:11 PM
Originally posted by Penut
I love these ideas TJG and Corey! They're great! Don't blow me away for this... but what do us guys see in lesbian action? Hmmm, I never got it...
Penut! Your a cheerleader, man! I know your thinking about that kind of stuff. (:D JK) Anyway, I just put it in there, and I know (since the movie will not get made) that there is no chance in hell the MPAA will allow most of the stuff I'm doing.
XCoRyX
08-28-2003, 10:27 PM
Originally posted by Penut
I love these ideas TJG and Corey! They're great! Don't blow me away for this... but what do us guys see in lesbian action? Hmmm, I never got it...
penut...you male or female just curious...also i WILL get into details if you demand so,
Inglorious
08-28-2003, 10:29 PM
Yeah... I knew everyone would have fun with that. But I can take criticism... so I'll just laugh! :p
I'll get flack for this... but phone sex, I have a funny idea for putting this in one of my horror scripts... but I don't know how phone sex works. Can someone tell me?
See, Jason is downstairs, and they are all in a cabin and one couple decides to have phone sex (boy cabin to girl cabin), and right in the middle Jason off's the boy! But how does it work (phone sex)?
Inglorious
08-28-2003, 10:31 PM
Originally posted by XCoRyX
penut...you male or female just curious...also i WILL get into details if you demand so,
I'm a male... :)
XCoRyX
08-28-2003, 10:35 PM
and you don't get the big deal of hot lesbian sex action? :)
nonetheless,i've never done it *looks around mysteriously* (jk i really havent) but as far as phone sex goes,basically I would think or just write in them talking sexual to each other,kinda like (god this will sound so corny)-
have the girl moan and such and throw in the always "oh yeah baby that feels so good" :)
have the guy be generic and cliched and say the always "yeah baby you like that" then maybe for comedic purposes throw in "how big is it baby?" and have her say something like "honestly?" and have the guy be like "Whats that mean"
just an idea.
TheJadedGamer
08-28-2003, 10:43 PM
Originally posted by XCoRyX
and you don't get the big deal of hot lesbian sex action? :)
nonetheless,i've never done it *looks around mysteriously* (jk i really havent) but as far as phone sex goes,basically I would think or just write in them talking sexual to each other,kinda like (god this will sound so corny)-
have the girl moan and such and throw in the always "oh yeah baby that feels so good" :)
have the guy be generic and cliched and say the always "yeah baby you like that" then maybe for comedic purposes throw in "how big is it baby?" and have her say something like "honestly?" and have the guy be like "Whats that mean"
just an idea.
LOL. Let's not get into phone sex, now....bad memories.
XCoRyX
08-28-2003, 11:52 PM
wait...dont tell me...you?...did?...nevermind I ain't asking dude.:)
Inglorious
08-29-2003, 07:30 PM
Originally posted by TheJadedGamer
LOL. Let's not get into phone sex, now....bad memories.
Well I am asking! PM me about this TJG! :D
X-Nightcrawler
08-29-2003, 10:17 PM
Awesome dude! I was meaning to read this. Going great Congrats.
Keegan and Davon...are those from what I think they are? http://www.angelfire.com/comics/atpdownloads1/images/Ncsmiles/nc_big_grin.gif
Yes. you two have some awesome ideas. Maybe you should team up, it's not a bad idea. just keep the rest of us fans informed of your progress. even if it doesn't sell doesn't mean we won't like reading it.
TheJadedGamer
08-30-2003, 03:24 PM
Originally posted by X-Nightcrawler
Awesome dude! I was meaning to read this. Going great Congrats.
Keegan and Davon...are those from what I think they are? http://www.angelfire.com/comics/atpdownloads1/images/Ncsmiles/nc_big_grin.gif
Keegan and Andrea (which I think is A.J. 's first name).
TheJadedGamer
08-31-2003, 11:11 PM
Added Character:
Dell, the stoner.
TheJadedGamer
09-01-2003, 02:40 PM
Here another preview script, with mild changes.
Also, I have finished the character bios and deaths:
Jimi Jarvis - Tommy Jarvis' son. He is an average, ordinary teen who basically wastes his life away on TV and stupid jokes.
Death: None, but he gets impaled by a flag pole.
Tommy Jarvis - Survived two 'Jason' attacks and one fake Jason. He comes to Crystal Lake again to stop the construction of housing, fearing that Jason will come for revenge on what happened to his 'home'.
Death: Nope.
Rowan McKenzy- Main character in Jason X. In XI, she is a fairly quiet and shy girl. She has a scrap book on Jason Voorhees.
Death: Nope.
Dell - The stoner guy. He is Rowan's best friend and had a relationship with Keegan at one time.
Death: Nope.
Ozzy - The fat guy who acts tough. He is a bastard.
Death: Sliced in half vertically.
Keegan - The lesbian chick who had a relationship with Dell. She is also the only one nice to him.
Death: Wrap around a chain and pulled out of a window, then stabbed in the chest.
Andrea- The 'other' lesbian chick.
Death: Bed squashed on ceiling.
Rachel - Ozzy's virgin girlfriend.
Death: Head bashed in, then she gets impaled (by head) on a shower.
Blake- The other bastard guy. The man responible for Crystal Lake Homes.
Death: Impaled by spear.
Mrs. McKenzy- Rowan's mother. Dell calls her hot.
Death: Choked, then pinned to a door by a knife.
Eddie - The crazy old man. He tells everyone 'they are going to die!!!'.
Death: Nope.
Steve - Construction worker.
Death: Head sliced off by lawn mower blade.
The Hockey Players- Uh...hockey players.
Death: Various.
The Hunter- Deer hunter who is drunk and thinks it is deer season. He shoots Jason in the head with an arrow; Jason doesn't like that.
Death: Crushed head.
The Lovers - a virgin and a rotor rutor guy.
Death: She gets stabbed in the head with a screwdriver, and he gets beheaded by a car door.
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