MisterKeitel
01-23-2004, 02:51 PM
Short Romantic Comedy
I've started an idea. Any idea where I go in the third act?
Starts off with Kira, a beautiful, professional women that is a wiz at her job, a scientist/intel officer with the US Air Force at a big state side base. At work, she's a genious. But in her personal life she's a mess - always going after poser "badboys" that end up treating her like shite.
Then, one day she meets Colin Christ, which is the stage name of a older punk rock singer, that says he used to be well known in Cleveland during the punk rock era of the late-80's/early-90's. He's like the baddest bad boy she's ever met. He dressed in all black. Has dozens of scary tattoos and studs. Talks with an Irish accent. Has a massive drug habbit and a criminal past as well as a punk rock past of drinking and violence.
So, she falls in love with this guy. They have a wonderful few weeks and then, just when she expects him to start treating her like shite -just like all the other loosers- he dose not do that. He keeps on treating her nice.
This throws her for a loop and makes her feel uncomfortalbe. Being that she is part of a Intel group, she does some research on him and finds that Colin Christ never existed - that in reality this guy is named Elliot Osbourn, a nice guy, and that he invented this whole persona of a bad boy just to fool her into falling in love with her.
She's not sure how this makes her feel.
I don't know where to go after this?
I've started an idea. Any idea where I go in the third act?
Starts off with Kira, a beautiful, professional women that is a wiz at her job, a scientist/intel officer with the US Air Force at a big state side base. At work, she's a genious. But in her personal life she's a mess - always going after poser "badboys" that end up treating her like shite.
Then, one day she meets Colin Christ, which is the stage name of a older punk rock singer, that says he used to be well known in Cleveland during the punk rock era of the late-80's/early-90's. He's like the baddest bad boy she's ever met. He dressed in all black. Has dozens of scary tattoos and studs. Talks with an Irish accent. Has a massive drug habbit and a criminal past as well as a punk rock past of drinking and violence.
So, she falls in love with this guy. They have a wonderful few weeks and then, just when she expects him to start treating her like shite -just like all the other loosers- he dose not do that. He keeps on treating her nice.
This throws her for a loop and makes her feel uncomfortalbe. Being that she is part of a Intel group, she does some research on him and finds that Colin Christ never existed - that in reality this guy is named Elliot Osbourn, a nice guy, and that he invented this whole persona of a bad boy just to fool her into falling in love with her.
She's not sure how this makes her feel.
I don't know where to go after this?