PsychoFreak
02-24-2004, 04:46 PM
Hey
This is my horror poem i wrote a couple of hours ago, Freddy and Ruby gloom are me and my best friends "alter egos", just in case you were wondering. So here it is, tell me what you think of it.
She sits on her chair in the white room
That place she sits in reeks of doom
She was the blood-splattered bride and he was the groom
There marital name? Freddy and Ruby Gloom
“Well Ruby I’m not sure I believe you,
I’ll get my knife to cut right through you”
You see Ruby was having an affair
Tell Freddy? My God she wouldn’t dare!
You see Freddy is a bit mad in the head
But know it doesn’t matter because Ruby is dead.
But for better or for worse Ruby would not die
For she would just sit in her grave and cry
She swore she would get revenge on Freddy
In a most gruesome way,
And she would make all the children watch her slay.
Ruby was now overly hated,
For she was a psychotic sadist
Finally Ruby’s soul was put to rest
It’s a shame Ruby and Freddy could not wed
But what Ruby did not know is-
Freddy was not dead.
Ruby’s scream could be heard till dawn
They found her cold dead corpse rotting on the lawn.
This is my horror poem i wrote a couple of hours ago, Freddy and Ruby gloom are me and my best friends "alter egos", just in case you were wondering. So here it is, tell me what you think of it.
She sits on her chair in the white room
That place she sits in reeks of doom
She was the blood-splattered bride and he was the groom
There marital name? Freddy and Ruby Gloom
“Well Ruby I’m not sure I believe you,
I’ll get my knife to cut right through you”
You see Ruby was having an affair
Tell Freddy? My God she wouldn’t dare!
You see Freddy is a bit mad in the head
But know it doesn’t matter because Ruby is dead.
But for better or for worse Ruby would not die
For she would just sit in her grave and cry
She swore she would get revenge on Freddy
In a most gruesome way,
And she would make all the children watch her slay.
Ruby was now overly hated,
For she was a psychotic sadist
Finally Ruby’s soul was put to rest
It’s a shame Ruby and Freddy could not wed
But what Ruby did not know is-
Freddy was not dead.
Ruby’s scream could be heard till dawn
They found her cold dead corpse rotting on the lawn.