Criminal Rock
08-15-2004, 03:30 PM
I have no clue if anyone has ever done this idea before, if we have shut this down please. ;) I was just wondering if people could share their own music, poems, or whatever with other schmoes, NO criticism what so ever!!! Share whom your influences are and why you decided to write it… I do not know, I just thought of something early this morning at 2:00, thought it was a good idea…
I’ll start.
Sail
Here it starts
I go walking
in unscarred, unsacred
I serenade the moon
my vice speaks
my lips slip
sail away
unscarred
underneath her, unheard
emerged as earth
only now it’s
time for me
my rebirth
my redemption
this is love
is this love
this, is love
I wrote this after one of my close cousins' died from lung cancer. I have no clue what this ones influences are.
I’ll start.
Sail
Here it starts
I go walking
in unscarred, unsacred
I serenade the moon
my vice speaks
my lips slip
sail away
unscarred
underneath her, unheard
emerged as earth
only now it’s
time for me
my rebirth
my redemption
this is love
is this love
this, is love
I wrote this after one of my close cousins' died from lung cancer. I have no clue what this ones influences are.