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DarkMarch
09-09-2004, 11:07 AM
Silly as it may sound but ive got a few ideas for horor movies.
Like many of yous ill lay it on the table.
well i wrote a plot idea for a new freddy movie...
It would tie all the actors who survived from the 6 pt epic (exclueding new nightmare and fvj)....
but it was pretty much was the idea was freddy days were up, elm street in it self was going to be demolished.
it was going to be about how the council and higher up officals think that if they destroy elm street it self it could finally wipe out memory such of Freddy and end the so called blood line of original elm street kids of the town.... its rough idea.
but it would reveal Freddy decides to get Alice her child and the other surviving charactors from the series and end it for good.
If Freddy was going down it would be he'd take everyone it also involved his daughter from (pt 6) who is doing counsellin for teens in a new town which she treats Alices son , though there is no relation of them knowning eachothers connection, we find out Alice has gone down hill and such....

Spoiler for anyone who hasnt seen pt 3 of Nightmare series.

Also the story would bring Nancy, i couldnt figure a great way to bring her back after her ending in pt 3 but i thought why not fake that she died... like the ending of pt 3 was a dream of nancy's Funeral...

making Nancy has gone off in hiding, and Freddy ends up finding out, and one by one he takes care of em all.
It would be very dark like pt 7 but it also would be very psychological like the first 1.

This one scene where one of the victims is in nancys old house (dream of course) and the he goes to nancy's room, and finds nothing as he is about to turn around the door shuts on him. then from behind the closet door opens and our guy goes to see wot it is. he grabs hold of a nail file (well thats we call it in Oz lol) and walks towards the closet. he gets in front of it and then stabs the close in case of anyone hiding behind it.
he ends up knocking stuff out of the closet and then pushes the clothes aside and finds nothing behind them. Then as he sighs in relief he ends up seeing something on the floor a picture of nancy he bends down to get it (camera shot from ground view showin him coming to the pic) and we see Freddy quickly and silently crawling on the ceiling he stops looks down and then crawls away. just before the guy sees him the bedroom door opens on its own and the dude bolts out of the room. he makes his way down stairs and then find the front door is locked he hears someone upstairs and goes out the side door and ends up on the back porch as he's about to take a step he hears a sound from inside he turns and in that few seconds Freddy comes crawling from underneath the backporch steps looks at him before crawling back under. then u know wot happens.
But im leaving so much detail out coz it would be too long to read the it already is LOL, but yeah it was one of my ideas...
My fav bit in my script is where Alice slams the door and freddys claws come through the door right into her, and she pulls her self off the door as she falls to the floor. as she looks up freddy looks at her and does something which he doesnt reallie do and that is he says to her "Your not going to die like this, ha i got bigger plans for you alice" and she wakes up screaming with only scratch marks. So freddy is more evil and more smart and a mind Fucker in my story his got big reasons similar to FVJ...
Well thats my lame attempt lol maybe i should stick to writing music and studying psychology LOL!
Hope i didnt bore anyone if i did lol u can take my 5mins of wot ive taken from u lol...

Fettdog
09-09-2004, 03:21 PM
Hi DarkMarch and welcome aboard!

I'm going to move your post to General Horror Talk as this thread is specifically for upcoming and current movies:)

mindkiss69
09-10-2005, 05:56 PM
I've got an idea for a horror movie ; I'll post my idea when I have enough time-- right now I have to go .

It's called Smileyfacedkiller. The plot is excellent, to me. I may one day make this movie.

zombievictim
09-10-2005, 07:10 PM
I actually wrote a script and finished it about a year or so ago. It needs some work but its a pretty basic slasher. I wouldn't compare it to Scream but thats the closest thing to compare it to. It is actually very dark with not a whole lot of happiness. It's a simple plot but I can't explain it in words without making in sound extremely corny so here are the first couple of pages.

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EXT. HALBROOKS PENITENTIARY - NIGHT

SWEEPING CAMERA- THE OLD PENITENTIARY

The Penitentiary was old and looked as if it hadn’t been
cleaned in years. It was red brick with an electric fence
with barb wire wrapped around the outer edges of the
perimeter. Three towers were standing tall across the
concrete and brown grass.


INT. PENITENTIARY TOWER - NIGHT

A guard sitting down in a chair, high in a tower, was
watching TV eating cheeto’s. He had a round man with two
chins, a moustache and his pants were so tight they looked
liked they would tear off of him. His name tag said BILL and
his hair had a resemblance to Bill Doutrieve. On the TV was
KING OF THE HILL which the guard was laughing at. His
shotgun was next to him standing up against a box.
Occasionally he would look out on the lawn.


INT. OLD PENITENTIARY CELL BLOCK 1 - NIGHT

SWEEPING CAMERA- CELLS

A guard walked by the cells which are all dark and damp.
They seem to have no sign of life in them. No prisoners are
awake and they seem to not move a muscle.

THE CAMERA STOPS ON A CELL

A man appears to be sleeping on the old thin cot looking
bed. The cell had pictures all over the wall from classic
movies about murders such as SEVEN and SAW. A small dresser
lay close to the cell gates to keep personnel possessions
in. The guard next to the cell and stops.

CLOSE UP- NAME TAG

The guards name tag was poorly sewn and in the right-hand
corner said “Halbrook’s Guard”. Below it in Bold print said
the name “Barry”.

He looks into it in amazement at who the cell withheld. He
walked past the cell and shook his head until he was out of
sight. Suddenly the man in the bed shot straight up. He has
a dark gloomy look to him and a look in his eyes like he had
seen a ghost. He had a huge grin on his face and seems to be
very excited.

He had dark prison clothes on which looked like they hadn’t
been washed in days. His face is unshaven, his hair all over
the place, and suddenly dark glare on his face. The glare
suddenly turned into smirk then into a original grin. He
walked over to the dresser and pulled out a security guard
uniform. It looked exactly like the one they use at
HALBROOKS and had the name BARRY.

NARROW SHOT- CELLS

The security guard named BARRY started to walk back down the
hall towards the dark man’s cell. He stopped again at the
cell. Then looked down and saw a brand new cigarette and a
match.

BARRY
(to himself)
HMMM. That’s wierd. Guess one of
the prisoners dropped it.


He picked up the cigarette and match. He lit the match
against the concrete wall. He lit the cigarette and placed
it in his mouth. He took a drag and sighed. A look of relief
swept over his face. He leaned up against the concrete wall
between the cells and took another drag. Suddenly an arm
lunged forward and started to choke the guard. The arm
pulled BARRY closer to the cell where the arm came from. The
other arm took the pen that was in BARRY’s pocket. In a
fluent motion the pen was plummeted into the guards neck.

The pen was then twisted to greaten the pain and quicken his
death. Barry gurgled but couldn’t scream because he was
still being choked. Then BARRY stopped struggling and then
slowly went into a deep dark eternal sleep.

The man took the keys which were attached to the guards
waist and started to cycle through them. Key by key he would
place it in the key hole and see if it fit. Finally he found
the correct one and unlocked the cell door. He reached into
his small dresser and pulled out his prison clothes. He
placed them next to the guard.

INT. CORRIDOR 1 - NIGHT

Now the dead guard is fully dressed in a prisoner’s wardrobe
and the prisoner is dressed in the guards wardrobe. He
dragged the guard’s body to his station which was at the far
end of the wall. It was in the same hall as the prison
cells. He dropped the guards body and looked through the
station. On the wall was a list of prisoners in that
specific cell block. He cycled through the list with his
fingers on the names. His finger suddenly stopped on a name.
HARRISON JACKSON.

He carefully tore the name off the list and placed it inside
his pocket. With the keys he had taken earlier from the
guard, he unlocked a drawer. In it was a hand gun with two
fully loaded magazines and a knife. He placed the handgun
into his pants and placed the clip into his pocket along
with the knife. He picked up the body and again started to
drag it.


INT. CORRIDOR 2 - NIGHT

Harrison picked up the guard and started to tremble.

HARRISON
(yelling)
Open up you guys. One of the
prisoners tried to commit suicide
with a ballpoint pen


SECURITY GUARD
Oh shit! This stuff always happens
right before my damn vacation


They ran for the “injured prisoner”. Their footsteps echoed
throughout the narrow hallway. They ran up to him in panic.
They knelt down at the body and had a confused look on their
faces.

SECURITY GUARD
This guy sure looks like that new
guy that just came in


He looked back at Harrison to see what his reaction would
be. Suddenly the knife that Harrison had was shoved into the
eye of the guard. He fell back onto the floor and screamed.
The other guard just watched in awe as his fellow employee
was injured. Harrison then leaned over and grasped the front
and back of the injured guards head. He jerked his hands to
the left then quickly to the right which snapped his neck.
This instantly killed him. Harrison then looked over at the

other guard who began to take action. He took out his club
and was ready to take action. Harrison leaned over and
pulled the knife from the dead man’s eye.

He then look towards the other guard with the knife in his
hand. He jolted towards the guard. The guard swung his club
but Harrison caught the club and lunged the knife forward.
It punctured through the mans rib-cage and it pierced his
heart. The man fell to the ground face first pushing the
knife deeper into his chest. He then rolled over with his
heart exposed and the knife still stuck in his chest.
Harrison reached over and pulled the knife out of his chest.
BANG! The left side of the guards face was torn away by the
bullet.

He then walked over to the desk that the guards were once
at. A pair of keys for a FORD F-150 lay on the desk. He took
the keys and walked towards a door. On the door read
“PARKING LOT”.


INT. JERRY'S LIVING ROOM - NIGHT

Seven friends sat in a living room surrounding a TV. They
sat on couches, chairs and one was on the ground. They
looked like every day teenagers around the ages of seventeen
and eighteen years old.

CONNIE
So what movies did you assholes
pick out?


Connie had a Jessica Alba look to her. She was the sleazy
girl you would find at a bar. She had short brown hair with
a bikini top on. Her shorts were extremely short which
showed off her long smooth legs. She had looks and a body
which most guys desired.

BILL
Awe your so cute


Bill looked like your average jock. He had a body shaped
like a football player’s and intelligence which was
definitely like a football player. He had short spiked brown
hair and he had a bad case of five o’clock shadow. He had
his Varsity Football jersey on.

JERRY
The good ones obviously


Jerry looked like Mos Def and had a great love of movies and
you could definitely tell. He had an original Star Wars
T-shirt and a Scarface Jacket was draped over the couch
where he sat.

CONNIE
Shut up!


TED
Well we got the greatest movie of
all time


He holds up a movie with a picture of a burnt man on it.

TED
Nightmare On Elm Street and one of
the okayest movies of all time...


He holds up a movie with an outlining of a person on it.

TED
Friday the 13th


Ted was over weight with a young Chris Farley look to him
who also loved Movies. His even greater passion was
cartoons. He had a Homer Simpson T-shirt on with an Aqua
Teen Hunger Force necklace and a Family Guy watch.

TED
And for all you people that don't
like those movies...


He looks over at Connie with a judging look on his face.

TED
We have a very good mix' holds up
a movie Freddy vs. Jason!!!


CONNIE
Oh yeah we get to be scared
shitless for the night


SARA
Well that's all you can ask for
from these two


Sara looked like a young supermodel with her beauty only
surpassed by her brains. She was still the most beautiful
girl of the batch of friends. She had a tight plain white
shirt on with tight khaki pants on.

JERRY
Well how bout we start this up!


Jerry walked up with one of the DVD’s in his hand and looked
towards Sara who had the remote to the TV in her hand.

JERRY
Hey turn it to channel 3 so we can
watch the movie


Sara turned the TV to channel 3 and there was a report on
the escape of the serial killer.

HEAD OF PRISON
According to our camera’s at
approximately 1:30 AM Harrison
stabbed one Barry Geller, a
security guard here, with his very
own pen killing him. He then
dressed in Mr. Keller's uniform
and went to the front desk where
he used Mr. Keller as a prisoner
that tried to kill himself


TED
That sick son of a bitch


JERRY
Yeah man that's just plain
disgusting, he must have been
molested as a child


HEAD OF PRISON
The guards, Mr. Reardon and Mr.
Weller, seeing there was a
prisoner hurt, rushed to help, but
little did they know that it was
Harrison. Harrison, using the
same pen to kill Mr. Keller,
Stabbed Mr. Reardon. Mr. Keller
was then stabbed with a knife. He
then shot Mr. Keller in the face
to make anyone near the perimeter
to make him seem like Harrison
until analyzed. He then took Mr.
Reardon's car keys and drove off.
He killed Mr. Ghans who worked at
the ga...


Jerry turned the VCR on so they could start to watch the
movie.

JERRY
I'm sick of hearing about people
dying


TED
Yeah I wanna see it!

They popped in Nightmare on Elm Street and watched it some
intently, others bored.

zombievictim
09-10-2005, 07:11 PM
TWENTY MINUTES LATER...

Connie stood up and grabbed her coat. She turned towards the
others.

CONNIE
Well I think I'm gonna go for a
walk


Bill on que got up and put his coat on.

BILL
Yeah I think I will too


They moved up close to each other and slowly walked out of
the house. They were groping each other along the way.

KEVIN
Man why cant those guys just say
they're going to her house to fuck


Kevin was an outsider and definitely looked like it. He had
a Kevin Bacon look to him and he was in no way a jock. He
had an average body size but everything was all about
intelligence.

JERRY
Ya know what fuck them. I wanna
watch the damn movie!


TED
Damn straight!



INT. CONNIE'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

Bill and Connie started having sex. While they were having
sex Bill looked in the corner and saw a devilish face. He
ignored it and kept going. When they were done they lay next
to each other. Bill got a beer from the fridge next to the
bed. He took a sip then handed it to Connie. They drank it
together. They didn’t seem to be in love but something close
to it. Suddenly a laugh echoed through the room. Because of
the echo they couldn't detect the source of the laugh.

CONNIE
What the fuck was that


BILL
How the hell would I know

He immediately looked back in the corner and saw nothing.
They both had a look of fear in their eyes not knowing what
would happen next. The look in Bill’s eyes showed that he
was scared.

BILL
Go look in the bathroom


CONNIE
Why should I?


BILL
Just go there and do it. Now!


CONNIE
Fine, but you can forget about
gettin any of this


She shows off her butt and walks...


INT. CONNIE'S BATHROOM - NIGHT

...into the bathroom. She looked around and then turned
around looking at the door. A frustrated look came across
her face. There was enough room behind the door for someone
to hide behind so she slowly walked towards it. She reached
for the door knob and quickly yanked the door back to
uncover the laughing man. She jumped when the door slammed
shut. She looked back behind the door. There was no one. She
turned around and look towards the shower. Behind the
curtain seemed to be another hiding place. She crept up to
the shower and then yanked the curtain back. She saw a... a
towel hanging in the shower. She pulled the towel down and
tossed it onto the sink.

She started to make way towards the door and then noticed
something behind the toilet bowl. It was yellow smiley face
and it was wrapped carefully in a plastic bag. She bent down
to get it when suddenly a hand violently grabbed the back of
her head and shoved her head quickly into the toilet bowl.
She couldn’t even scream. To block out any access noise, the
man used the towel on the sink over her head.

JACK
(laughing)
Know how to swim. Doesn't look
like it. She's drowning she's
drowning

INT. CONNIE'S BEDROOM - NIGHT

BILL
Hey what the fuck are you doin in
there?


He looks at the door, which is shut. He turns over to the
night stand next to the bed which has his beer. After he
takes a sip he turns back towards the door. It was wide open
and Bill had a strange look on his face.

BILL
(shakes his head)
Ahhh screw this


He sat back and layed in a relaxing way. While he was doing
this a shadow moved across the room ending up somewhere.

TOP VIEW- BED

Bill lays across the bed stretching.

JACK
Sorry, but you gotta know the
rules
(he laughs)

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Some of the dialouge is corny in the beginning but who cares. This was actually a big hit at my high school so I guess thats a good thing. This is only the first ten pages out of a 104 page script so if you wanna read the rest just PM me.