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JayWolf
06-30-2005, 12:49 AM
ARRRRRRRRRRRWWWWWWWWWHHHHHHOOOO to you all! Since I loved the last horror movie story game so much, I felt it was time to dabble into yet another one.

Anyway, here are the rules/guidelines, courtesy of Spacemonkey who came up with these delightful little games:


1- Dont insult anyone, and dont make stupid senseless jokes that dont have anything to do with the story.

2- You have to follow the last post storyline, if your post and notice that your post doesnt follow the last post storyline, go back and edit it so that it will.

3- Original characters only, dont go and put Freddy Kruger or Jason Vorhees in this one, use only character that you made up.

4- Make your post 40 lines at maximum. We got to leave room for others to take a crack at this too, you know? ;)

5- Make it good. Come on, put your back to it! Get your creative horror juices flowing!

Also, a big thanks to Spacemonkey for creating the horror movie story games. Now on with the show! :cool:

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Seven-year-old May Withers fluttered her eyes opened when she heard the immense roar of thunder outside vibrate through her room. Looking out her window, May could see extremely strong gusts of wind whipping objects about like ragdolls. The conditions outside were so violent that it was as if a tornado had come. Yet, surreal as it was, May felt safe inside her home because what was going on outside could not affect her from where she was.

May looked at the clock by her bedside, the time reading 11:34. May shivered for a moment, starting to feel uneasy. At that moment, a gigantic bolt of lightning struck and the power went out. Letting out a scream of surprise, May threw the covers over her head.

After a near endless moment of silence, May peeked from under her bedsheets.

"Mom? Dad?" May called out, fear present in her voice.

The reply May got was one that made her tremble all over. Outside her window, May could hear screeching claw-like noises. As this happened, objects throughout May's room, dolls, lamps, or any fragile, suddenly burst into an opus of exploding glass and porcelain.

Wrapping the blanket around herself for protection, May slowly got out of her bed and made her way to the bedroom door as silent as possible. As soon as she touched the door handle, glass from her window cracked and blew out, filling the room with the violent gusts. A moment later, an obscure figure slowly creeped into the room from the window and onto the floor, heading under the bed.

May struggled with the door futilely as she watched her bed quake and tremble as if something was mutating underneath. As a hatchet-clenched fist shot out from underneath the bed, May pulled and banged on the door harder, screaming as she did. While the figure continued to crawl out from under the bed, May managed to pry the door open and run out of the room.

Running out into the upstairs hallway of her house, May spotted her father and ran toward him, embracing him.

"Oh God, Daddy! You have to help me!!!" May cried out.

At that moment, May let out a cry of pain as her father grabbed a hold of her hair and pulled her up from the ground, holding her at face-to-face level. May screamed continuously as her father pulled a butcher knife from behind his back, ready to plunge it into his daughter.

May fell to the ground as a chunk of her hair ripped from her scalp, freeing her from her father's grasp. Getting up quickly, May ran for the stairs.

"HELP ME PLEASEEEE!!!" May screamed out through tears.

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Alright, it's somebody else's turn now.
Good luck. ;)

TATU
06-30-2005, 12:14 PM
May bolted down the stairs screaming as she went. Her head bled heavily as blood blinded her to the situation around her.

Hiding behind her kitchen table she desperately searched for her mother. Whatever was happening, May thought, her mother could help her. Another crash of lightning. Did May see what she though she saw?

Her mother came up behind her wielding an axe. She spoke in a hushed voice, quickly and without candor. "Your father's gone insane honey. He tried to kill me and he'll kill you."

"Mommy he couldn't. No I won't believe it!" Mays eyes bulged from their sockets, she couldn't believe such a thing about her own daddy.

"Come on out honey. Daddy wants to play."

May stood up and walked over wiping the blood from her eyes.

"I'm sorry about that hun. I thought you were a monster. Like the one under your bed." Cleverly he put the knife behind his back.

"Give me a hug. Come on don't be afraid."

May's mother quickly sprung to action. She swung the axe connecting squarely with his right shoulder.

"BIIITTTTCCCCHHHHH!!!!"

He swung the knife around and jammed it into her right shoulder.

May's mother swung again but May's father ducked and charged. Both parents fell over the table crashing down on top of May.

May's mother quickly got the best of the situation and went for her axe. May's father shoved a stunned May into the way of a swing meant for him.

May's arm slowly and painfully fell to floor blood spurtted from the wound.

"The prophecy must be fulfilled Barbara. The little one must die!"

spacemonkey
08-08-2005, 06:23 PM
May let out a scream as she saw her arm fall on the floor. Blood gushed out of the stump left on her body.

"Jim! You have to leave that in the past! She will not come to harm us!" said Mays mother as she held tightly to her axe. She would strike Jim down with it even if it meant killing him.

"No Kate, its not in the past! She is evil!" screamed Jim as the thunder and the lightning outside of the house cracked fiercely.

"No! May is not evil! She is our daughter! We have to help her! Please come on, help me pick her up, we need to get her to a hosp-" and something caught Kates eye as she was trying to pick May up from the floor.

Mays blood seemed to be moving around the floor. The rather large pool of blood was collecting itself. The blood had stopped flowing out of May and was slowing creeping itself back into Mays arm. Then almost as if you were rewinding a movie on your VHS, Mays hand jumped from the floor and reconnected itself with Mays body.

The little seven year old girl in Kates arms suddenly jumped back to life. Her head spinned around as fast as a lightning bolt to look at her mother, then she spoke.

"Its all true mother. I am evil."

normanbatesjr
08-08-2005, 11:17 PM
May opened her mouth wide and a huge tongue slithered out. The tounge wrapped itself around Kate's neck and squeezed. With a snap, Kate's head popped off!