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07-10-2005, 03:38 PM
I wrote this back when I saw H8 in theatres. It was when I was first understanding movie scripts and stuff. It is kind of funny.
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Halloween: Haddonfield-War.
Scene One-
Caption: Halloween: Haddonfield War
Caption: SPRINGFIELD SANITARIUM 2001.
Brandy:
Have you ever heard of a patient named Laurie Strode?
Tracy:
No...why?
Brandy:
Never mind.
Tracy:
No, no! Tell me.
Brandy:
She decapitated a man.
Tracy:
My god! Decapitated --? --why'd she do it?
Brandy:
She thought it was her brother. Long story.
Tracy:
Tell me.
Brandy:
No I can't. It's a classified story. But can people really be born evil or do
they become that way? I mean, the thorn! It'd be impossible!
Tracy:
Those are Hypothetically Speaking Questions not Technically Speaking Questions.
I didn't study that in Theological Biology. I'm not able to answer that question.
Brandy:
Sorry. You wanna see her?
Tracy:
Sure.
In Laurie's room are pictures of Jamie Lloyd and John Tate. The Two Nurses
enter.
Brandy:
Hello Laurie.
Tracy:
Is she alright?
Brandy:
I don't know. She a that one special B word that we aren't aloud saying in here
anyway. But it couldn't hurt to talk to Dr. Zinc in the morning. She's always
like that. Such a brat. Let's go.
The Two Nurses exit. Laurie breaks her window and crawls out onto the wall She
slips and she starts to fall. She grabs the edge of her window seal and pulls
herself up. She puts her body back in as SCREAMS come from the hall. Michael
enters Laurie's room to find that she is gone. She is on the roof, when she hears
foot-prints coming up the stairs. She hears the body trip and immediately hides
in a closet over by the edge of the woof. Michael enters to go to the closet and
as he does a crane picks him up by his feet and Laurie (really Nurse Brandy) comes
out. She starts to unmask him when. He stabs her in her heart and she falls over
the edge of the roof. She says something before she hits the ground. It is kind
of muffled but it sounds like she said, "See you Michael!" He salutes her as
LAURIE comes out from the closet.
Laurie:
Hey Michael, I used Nurse Brandy as a stunt double for me...hope you did
enjoy...since you didn't kill her! Your mission has failed because I am no
longer afraid of you...are you afraid of me? I know you are planning on killing
me, so as us being Brother and sister? Could I see your face? I don't wanna wait
till you die. Cause I know it will take forever before you die.
He starts to take off his mask.
Laurie:
Trick or treat Michael!
She pushes him over the ledge where he ends up falling onto a tree stabbing a
whole strait through him. Michael's body is somewhat moving when he gets up and
throws his knife at Laurie. The back of it hits her in the head, knocking her
down. She falls into the electrical box and gets shocked. She electrocutes
badly. She gets off and yells to Michael.
Laurie:
Go ahead and throw another knife at me. Fine with me. Your mission still won't
be complete, Michael! I took John and hid him. Hid him from your devil eyes and
your rage, you thrasher!
He throws a butcher knife at Laurie's stomach. It hits her and she falls down,
dead. Michael jumps down from the tree with a whole through his body. He walks
inside and finds a guard in a black suit. He slices the Guard across the wrist.
The Guard howls in pain. Michael takes his knife and slices the Guard against the
other wrist. More howls come out.
Guard:
Help! Help!
Michael takes his knife and stabs the Guard in the SOLAR PLEXUS and the Guard blinks
a few times and falls against his floor, dead. Michael takes the costume that the guard
is wearing and puts it on himself. He falls back, into a coma, for he lost all the blood.
MovieTV
07-10-2005, 03:41 PM
Caption: 2 Weeks Later ~ Halloween 2001 ~ Haddonfield, Illinois.
Scene Two-
Jessie, 19 comes out from the shower wrapped around in a towel. Someone dressed as MICHAEL
MYERS steps in from of her and ips the towel off. The boy takes off the mask to reveal,
JOSH, 18.
Jessie:
Give me that towel.
Josh:
Yeah?
Jessie:
Yeah.
Josh:
Come and get it.
He throws the towel in the air, Jessie jumps and gets it she lets go of her chest for 6
seconds and we barely see her chest as she puts the towel on.
Josh:
Can I have a kiss?
Jessie:
Sure.
They kiss for a few seconds. Josh tries to take the towel off but Jessie knees him in his
stomach. He falls back over the stairs and lands where the stair-cases hole is in the circling
staircase. He falls down into the basement, where he finds that his basement used to be the
sanitarium. He sees the dead body and the body of Michael Myers laying there. He covers his
mouth and runs upstairs where he tells Jessie about what happened.
Scene 3-
Int. -Justins room.
Jessie:
Look Dustin, Justin.
Dustin:
No.
Justin:
Yes.
Dustin:
Look Jessie, I don't want to be in your INTERNET show.
Justin:
Well I do
Dustin:
Whitever.
Caption: 2 WEEKS LATER.
Brad:
Is this safe?
Alex:
Of course it is you dumbo!
Justin:
Miss Jessie...exactly if you're running this program on a 3mrb port, then where
would the 2ytv port go for the camcorders and control room monitors?
Alex (whispering to Brad):
My brother's a showoff.
Justin:
I heard that.
Jessie:
You know you're right. I got to cancel the SRS-MP3 port in order for the 2ytv
port to go into the monitor for the picture.
Justin:
But you need the SRS-MP3 port in order to get sound.
Jessie:
How about the Ten-Ten-46-46 port?
Justin:
You have one of those?
Jessie:
Yeah...so.
Justin:
Those are the worst ports ever!
MovieTV
07-10-2005, 03:44 PM
Scene 4-
Inside the Trailer.
Jessie:
Hey Josh!
Josh (w/out his shirt on) (coming out from bedroom):
Yeah, babe?
Jessie:
Go get that Myers costume and scare those kids silly.
Justin (on monitor):
Michael Myers born November 3, 1957. Killed his sister in 1963. (his voice fades
off).
Josh:
(ARE YOU SURE)
Jessie:
(YES) I'm sure.
Scene 5-
The Bathroom.
Josh has been striped to wear he is about to pull off his underwear when we
CUT TO: AN ANGLE AT HIS FEET.
His underwear falls as some black pants come over his legs. He puts his shirt on
off stage.
Scene 6-
Main Room.
Josh walks out.
Josh (muffled by mask):
If you see me ripping Alex's clothes off or anyone's clothes off, it's just for
the show.
Jessie (confused):
Okay.
(regular tone):
Go gettem Tiger...I mean Michael.
Scene 7-
Inside House.
Michael/Josh enters he has a knife and scrapes it along Alex's shirt and pants.
He ends up in his BARNEY AND FRIENDS boxers.
Justin gets out a butcher knife and stabs Michael/Josh in the heart.
Michael/Josh falls down. He takes his mask off and they see that it was Josh. He falls
back, dead. Justin runs and ends up throwing himself out of a window. The real Michael
sees this and slices Justin's neck. He walks back in...he chases after the other 5.
Jennifer:
Oh god!
Cindy:
Quick! Over there!
Emily:
Hurry, hurry!
Trailer.
Jessie is cheering by the excitement.
Jessie:
How do they do that? Especially since my BABY can play duel roles w/out any
special EFX. Good job bayaybe! You are so fine in that costume! Whoo hoo!
The House.
Cindy:
Oh no! Hurry! Hurry! Hurry!
Brad (OS):
Michael! You get your two point 5 a-hole over here!
Michael, now hearing this, walks towards him.
Brad:
(con't)
Help me you idiots! Help me! Help ma-ma-ahhhhhhhh!
He is strangling Brad. Grunts for breath are coming. He lets go and Brad hits
the ground, dead.
Cindy:
Ah heck no!
Michael Myers has his knife clutched in his hand. He takes it and tries to stab
Cindy but she moves. It hits her shirt. It rips it. He tries to stab her again
but stabs the wall. He aims again and stabs her in her back. She falls back. His
body looks over the dead body. The others that're still alive, look at Myers.
Then they look at the door. The truck back to Myers to see he is not there. All of
a sudden, Michael comes down from a bar with his hand holding him up. Alex turns back
and screams. Myers takes a knife and slices it between Alex's leg. It cuts his feet
off. The knife goes through so fast that he falls back...knocked out. Jennifer grabs
Emily and runs off as we...
Scene 8-
Cut to: Trailer.
Jessie sits there when there is a knock at her door. She opens it to find Detective Johnson,
33.
Jessie:
Can I help you?
Johnson:
Why...yes. I understand about your "WEBCAST" and well the person that's killing
all of those people...
Jessie:
Pretending to kill.
Johnson:
No. They are really killed. And that person is MICHAEL MYERS! Your boyfriend
died.
Jessie:
Oh for the love of God! Did you hear that from some people? And how the heck do
I know if you're really a detective?
Scene 9-
Cut to: House.
Jennifer and Emily struggle to open the door. They open it to find Justin's body
hanging there. His fingers are moving.
Emily:
Justin?
He barely opens his eyes. He tries to speak.
Justin (hard to speak):
S...a...v...e your...self...!
He dies immediately. We zoom up to see the body is hanging by a ROPE. Jennifer
pushes the body aside and it swings. Blades come out of the body. Jennifer makes
it through. Emily is about to when a blade comes out of the stomach and stabs
her in her heart. She falls back. She crawls under. It takes her a few
minutes.
Jennifer:
Let's go.
Emily nods "YES". The run/walk fast to the trailer.
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07-10-2005, 03:48 PM
Scene 10-
Cut to: Inside Trailer.
Jennifer:
Oh god! Jessie! They're all dead.
Jessie:
I know.
Michael suddenly walks in the doorway. He turns to them.
Jennifer:
Oh my (GOD)! Run!
She hides behind a cabinet. Emily punches Michael as he walks towards the cabinet. Every
else runs out, and the Detective runs into the wall which kills him. Emily runs out. She
looks through the door and sees something a little blurry.
EMILY'S POV: A blurry vision of a 45 year old man that looks as if he is 25.
THE SHAPE'S POV: Emily stands there.
Michael is standing there. He strangles Emily...who falls down and bangs her head, knocking
her cold. He walks towards the house.
Scene 11-
Int. -House
Jessie:
Oh no...where's Emily and the Detective?
Jennifer (yelling frightened):
Would you just shut the heck up you brat!?
Jessie:
I have never been so insulted. Jennifer! Jennifer, do you hear that?
Jennifer (frightened):
N-no.
(a beat on the door as a hand comes crashing in).
RUN!
The run up-stairs. The door breaks down as the ladies look down and see the Shape standing
there. He starts to walk up the steps.
Jennifer:
Run!
Jessie:
Stop saying, "Run".
The start to run into a room.
Scene 12-
Int. -Room
Michael begins shaking the doorknob. He brakes the door down and starts walking
towards them. The walk backwards and run into a window. He continues to walk, so
they jump out of the window and land on the glass. The run to the basement and
lock the door as Michael appears in the backyard.
Scene 13-
Int. -Basement
They run around in the dark. All we can see are there shapes. Then the door opens
and the Shape walks in. Screams are heard as we see some red on the ground. Michael's
hand reaches to pull the light on and it does.
We see two dead bodies on the ground. He does the famous head turn and exits. He leaves
the door open. We see Jessie's body move just a little before she falls back. Michael
walks back in. He puts the bodies in a hand made washer. He hits start. We see through a
small window that Jessie is blowing for air. She starts to pass out as Michael takes the
bodies out and puts them in a hand made dryer. We see Jessie's eyes open and her glistening
all over. Michael hits TURBO DRY and the Jessie's body suddenly explodes then after a few
seconds, Jennifer's body starts to swell. It gets to puffy that the dryer starts to brake
open. The dryer's front goes down as Jennifer's body explodes. Michael starts to put his
hand over his eyes when blood covers him. He puts his hand down and his mask is a mess of
burnt blood. He falls on the floor with steam coming out of his eye holes in the mask. We
see his empty eye sockets and they suddenly grow back.
Scene 13-
Int. -Streets.
A few Minutes Later.
Emily starts moving. She stands up and sees James Penny standing there reaching
his hands out.
James:
Hey I like your legs.
Emily:
Ha, Ha! Vury funny.
James helps her up. Michael appears from the backyard of the house. James pulls out a gun.
James:
Em, get back!
He starts shooting at the Shape. He shoots 10 times and it is empty. The Shape continues to
come after them.
James:
Dear god! What is he, an animal cannibal?
Emily:
He's Michael Myers.
James:
Oh my! Run!
Emily starts to run. She stops.
Emily:
James! C'mon! James!
James:
Go to the Mackenzie's and tell them to call the Police.
Emily:
James! C'mon! He'll keel you!
James:
Go!
Scene 14-
Ext. -Mr. Mackenzie's house.
Emily:
Mr. Mackenzie! Mister--
Mr. Mackenzie (from inside):
You kids! Can't even do anything with my wife!?
Emily:
Mister Mackenzie. Misses Mackenzie! Open this dang door! NOW!
Mr. Mackenzie pulls his door open.
Mr. Mackenzie:
What the heck do you want?
Emily:
Michael Myers is out there!
Mr. Mackenzie:
Not that fool again!
Emily:
Again?
"What's Your Fantasy-Ludacris- Un-edited" starts and plays for 12 seconds.
Mr. Mackenzie:
Yeah, I've been dealing with people bringing there sorry butts over here for
about 40 years now. 39 to be exact.
Emily:
Oh no! James!
Scene 15-
Int. -Streets
James is standing there his neck being clutched by Michael Myers. Emily appears with Mr.
Mackenzie.
Mr. Mackenzie:
You sorry butt murderer!
He shoots Michael Myers in the head. He falls back, James get a chance to be let go. He
escapes.
James:
Thanks Emily...Mr. Mackenzie.
Caption: 1 Hour Later.
Reporter:
...And there was 3 survivors tonight. But out of the "Dangertainment" WEBSHOW
only 1 person survived. With the help of James Penny and Mr. Gary Mackenzie she
survived. Her name is Emily McGibbon and is a 19 year old. Her boyfriend James
nearly died if Michael wasn't shot in the head by Gary Mackenzie. Well at least
we can all be sure that he is dead, and Haddonfield won't experience any more
murders. More on Michael Myers on we return.
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07-10-2005, 03:53 PM
Scene 16-
Int. -Hospital
Girl Paramedic #1:
Got another one...it's Michael Myers.
Girl Paramedic #2:
What the heck? Are you kidding me?
Girl Paramedic #1:
Nope. Sorry.
Girl Paramedic #1 leaves. Girl Paramedic #2 opens the sheet when all of a
sudden...HE JUMPS UP AND KILLS PARAMEDIC #2! Girl Paramedic #1 enters as we
cut to:
Scene 17-
Ext. -Myers House.
Reporter:
Here we have Emily McGibbon, 1 of the survivors.
Emily (on mike):
I think we have truly experienced Halloween through Laurie Strode's eyes.
Aaron (os):
Hey Emily!
Emily:
Aaron!
He enters screen.
Aaron:
What the heck happened here?
Emily:
Michael happened.
Aaron:
God bless. Where's Jennifer?
Emily:
She blew up in the Myers basement.
Aaron:
No!
He runs off.
Scene 18-
Ext. -Myers Basement.
Aaron is outside the door.
Scene 19-
Int. -Basement
Aaron walks in and gasps.
Aaron:
No! No! No! No! Nooooooooooooooooooooo!
He starts to walk back. Michael is in front of him. Michael raises his knife. Aaron
knees him in the stomach and runs out. Michael shakes for a second and then exits.
Scene 20-
Int. -Streets
Aaron:
Everyone! QUIET DOWN!
Everyone quiets down.
Aaron:
(con't)
Michael is alive. He's right there!
Aaron points to the house.
Jimmy "Jim" Baboon:
Run away!
Aaron:
I'm voting with him!
Emily:
Oh no!
A knife suddenly stabs through Aaron's back. Everyone screams.
Jim:
Hey wait...has anyone seen James or Mr. Mackenzie?
Scene 21-
Int. -Judith's Bedroom/Myers House.
James and Mr. Mackenzie are lying there with there necks cut open, Maggots all
over their Esophagus. Emily and Jim walk in gagging with what the see. All of a
sudden the closet catches on fire.
Scene 22-
Ext. -Myers House
It starts catching on fire. The brick chimney starts to turn black. Maggots
start to come out of it and go all over the roof of the house. The
house collapses. John Tate comes out from nowhere.
John:
Everybody! Everybody! Listen:
Radio:
In other news, Laurie Strode, mother of John Tate and Jamie Lloyd was found
alive today, not dead. We know it is hard to believe since she had a butcher
knife through her stomach. She is now at the Haddonfield Memorial Clinic where
she was treated over 20 years ago. She is under the care of Dr. Jay Pay Morgan
and Nurse Sherry Morgan Himer. Also tonight right by the Hospital is a Janet
Jackson concert. She will be performing songs like Doesn't--
Scene 23-
Int. -Doyle Backyard.
Michael is stunned to hear that Laurie is still alive.
Scene 24-
Int. -Concert
Janet Jackson (singing):
D-does it matter what they fell of this to? Does it matter if they say hey, hey,
oh! Does it matter what they say? Never loved ya' anyway hey. Hey! Does it matter!?
Cheers come on. All of a sudden Michael Myers comes up and stabs Janet Jackson in
the back.
Janet Jackson:
Ugh!
She falls back...99% dead. Screams are heard off stage.
Scene 25-
Int. -Haddonfield Memorial Clinic
Guy Paramedic #1:
Dr. Morgan! Dr. Morgan!
Dr. Morgan (os):
What is it?
Guy Paramedic #2:
Janet Jackson has been stabbed in the back.
Nurse Morgan Himer:
Dear God. Is she alive?
Guy Paramedic #2:
We dunno.
Dr. morgan enters screen.
Guy Paramedic #1:
We brought her in on a stretcher.
Nurse Morgan Himer:
Well by gollie, bring 'er in.
The bring Janet Jackson on a stretcher. The knife has carefully been pulled out.
She is laying on her stomach with her head turned
towards the right.
Both Paramedics:
Here she is.
Scene 26-
Int. -Empty Room.
They lay Janet Jackson down on her stomach. They pull out a needle and start stitching the
lost skin back onto her back. After a few minutes they are done. They put some kind of
plastic over her back and pick her up and lay her done on her back. The heart monitor reads
very low, then a little higher, and finally average. She wakes up in pain.
Janet Jackson:
What happened?
Scene 27-
Int. -Laurie's room.
The Man in Black enters.
Man in Black:
Your job is done Laurie. Come Michael.
Michael enters with a new butcher knife. He walks over to Laurie and cuts her head
off. Him and the Man in Black exit.
Nurse Morgan Himer (os):
It took us all night to round up the patients. One was all the way over by
Orange County.
Dr. Wynn (os):
Let me see Laurie.
Nurse Morgan Himer (os):
Are you really a friend of Dr. Loomis?
Dr. Wynn (os):
Yes! Now can I see her?
Nurse Morgan Himer (os):
Right this way.
Dr. Wynn (os):
Finally.
They enter. Nurse Morgan Himer gasps.
Dr. Wynn:
Why's that happened?
Nurse Morgan Himer:
Dr. Morgan!
Dr. Wynn:
Hey I have a question.
Nurse Morgan Himer:
What?
Dr. Wynn:
Why do they call you Morgan Himer?
Nurse Morgan Himer:
I am Dr. Morgan's sister. I was called Nurse Morgan but then I got married after
I started to work here. Does that answer your question?
Dr. Wynn:
Y--
Dr. Morgan enters.
Dr. Morgan:
Yes?
Nurse Morgan Himer:
Look!
Dr. Morgan gasps.
Dr. Morgan:
What the heck happened?
Nurse Morgan Himer:
Look what I found.
She lifts up a miniature tape recorder and pushes play.
Man in Black's Voice:
Your done Laurie. Come Michael.
We can hear a knife go through the neck. She pushes stop.
Nurse Morgan Himer:
Obviously it was Dr. Wynn!
Dr. Wynn has "obviously" left.
Dr. Morgan:
How'd you know?
Nurse Morgan Himer:
Rumors.
Dr. Morgan:
Nice job.
Nurse Morgan (subtitled):
Thank you Doctaz.
Dr. Morgan:
We must find Michael, now.
Nurse Morgan Himer:
Okay.
MovieTV
07-10-2005, 04:02 PM
Scene 28-
Ext. - Myers House.
John:
What do you think is going to happen?
Radio:
This bulletin just came in. Laurie Strode just had her head cut off. They
believe Michael Myers did it. More as we return.
Jim (from the debris):
Yo! Is anyone (cough) there (cough ~ cough)?
John:
They're alive?
Emily:
Yeah...we're alive! Help us out!
John:
Well come on!
The all walk over to the where the house collapsed and find the two. They pull them out.
Emily's clothes have been burnt. Next to them is are two skeletons of Mr. Mackenzie and
James.
Emily:
Man, that skirred me.
Jim:
Yeah well it wasn't so pleasant for me either!
Emily:
Oh Jimmy!
Jim:
I'd like it if youse call me "Jim", please?
John:
Are you two alright?
Man (os):
They better be!
John:
Man! Shut the heck up!
Emily:
I guess the WEBCAST is over.
Jim:
Oh Emily!
Lindsey Wallace comes running out from the old Wallace house, screaming. Michael follows.
Tommy comes out from behind a tree.
Lindsey:
Help me! Help me!
She trips over a rock. Michael stabs her foot.
Tommy:
Come over here Boogeyman! It's between you and me! Time for you to burn
down where you belong! Die!
He tosses a knife and it hits Michael in the face. Michael walks backwards and falls down
by the sewer. Everyone runs to Lindsey. Michael takes the knife out of his head and walks
away.
Scene 29-
Int. -Dolphin House.
Michael brakes the door down. Hillary and Tiffany Dolphin scream!
Hillary:
It's Michael Myers!
Michael raises his knife. He walks over to Tiffany and stabs her
in her heart. She falls back dead.
Hillary:
Die!
She kicks his head. He hits the wall. She pulls the knife out of Tiffany, Tiffany moans, and
Hillary stabs Michael's head. She runs out.
Scene 30-
Int. -Streets
Scene 31-
Ext. -Streets
Scene 32-
Ext. -Alley
Scene 33-
Int. -Alley
Little Boy:
Hey there.
Pregnant Woman:
What are you doing out here? You're to young, besides Michael
is loose.
The Little boy skips along. Michael comes out and kills the Little Boy. He
walks after the Pregnant Woman. She can't run and ends up hiding in a garage.
Michael misses her. He tries to unlock the door. We hear the sound of a dead
bolt on the door.
Scene 33-
Int. -Garage.
Michael's hand reaches in and grabs her arm. She screams. She bites his arm. He lets
go. We see his arm punch another hole. She pulls out a sewing needle and stabs it into
his arm. It soaks into his arm. We hear it scrape a bone. Then the hand pulls out and
we hear a thud. She carefully opens the door. He is lying there, 6' 9". The needle falls
out of his arm and she fastly walks away.
Tommy Doyle (vo):
So let me get this strait....
Scene 34-
Int. -Streets.
Tommy:
...you killed Michael Myers?
Pregnant Woman:
Yes.
Tommy (grabbing her shirt collar):
You can't kill evil!
Pregnant Woman:
He was lying there, not even breathing.
Tommy:
Okay, then, let me see him.
Scene 36-
Ext. Garage.
Michael isn't laying there when Tommy and the Woman
get there.
Pregnant Woman:
He was laying right there!
Tommy:
I told you, you can't kill evil!
Michael comes up and stabs the Pregnant Woman in the back. She falls back, dead. Tommy pulls
out a pistol and shoots Michael 10 times in the ead. He falls back, dead. His forehead swells
up and starts to rip the mask open.
Caption: 1 hour later.
Reporter:
And so, we are all sure this is the last time.
Cop:
Okay! Take his mask off.
The take his mask off. His forehead has 10 holes and Michael's eyes are once again missing.
Cop:
Why is he missing his eyes?
Tommy:
Shot out in 1978.
Cop:
How was he able to know where he was going?
Tommy:
Who knows? - He's evil.
Reporter:
So is this the end of Michael?
Tommy:
We don't know.
His fingers move. No one sees it. He comes to a stand. Raises his knife. Stabs Tommy in the
back. Tommy falls down, dead. The COP shoots Michael w/a Bazooka and he falls back.
Brent (os):
Danggit dudes! What the heck happened here?
Jim:
Brent! Now ain't isn't quite the time!
Brent:
You are so stoopid!
"Stoopid A** " plays.
Cop:
Get that sucka out of here!
Cop #2:
Come on dude, get your butt out of here.
Brent (drunken sobbing):
Ugh.
He faints, to drunken to remember crap.
Cop 2:
Oh for the love the love of god!
Nurse Morgan Himer (os):
Good god! How much has he had to drink within the last 24 hours?
Jim:
Heck, I dunno. Probably about 29 kegs.
Gasping.
Scene 37-
Int. -Haddonfield Memorial Clinic
Scene 38-
Ext. -Room
Scene 39-
Int. -Janet Jackson's room
Scene 40-
Int. -Alley
Brent lies down, like he's into a coma. Then all of of a sudden, Brent gets up. He walks
over and Michael's hand shoots up and stabs Brent in his arm. Beer-Blood comes out. Brent
starts to dehydrate and falls back, dead. Michael comes to a stand.
Cop:
What the heck! We are all going to die?
Michael goes after Emily. For the first time ever he lifts his finger and talks to Emily.
Michael:
Emily! I shall pass on the THORN to you.
A few seconds go by then, A SHRIEK! Emily's wrist has the thorn
mark!
Cop 1/Cop 2:
Kill the evil!
Cop 3:
No! Are you two idiots?
He enters screen.
Cop 3:
She doesn't have the evil. It doesn't begin until Michael
is dead. So, we have to be careful to keep him alive!
Crowd:
What!
Emily:
You're telling me, that we have to keep my uncle alive!
Cop 3:
Basically, yeah!
Emily:
UGH! UGH! UGH! UGH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
EMILY (VO):
I hate this crap.
Jim:
Emily. Umily?
She goes the gate. Finds a glass bottle by the edge and brakes
it over the gate. It leaves a sharp piece of glass and she puts
over her wrist.
Cop 2:
Don't do it! It's poison.
She ignores him. We see Jim mouthing, "I LOVE YOU". She took it and stabbed it
in her wrist. She falls back.
Jim:
Emily McGibbon. 23 at age of death.
Dustin:
You know just one question?
(pause)
If Brent did die, then why is he ain't right there.
Brent (os)
Because I'm over here!
They turn to the right. He's standing there, a bandage on his arm.
Brent:
So is he destroyed?
"NO" everyone seems to make a face like. Hope, the dog, barks. Brent calls
Dustin to help him. He gives Dustin a sword that ways 30 pounds. Dustin takes
it and SLLICKK it scrapes against his arm, making Michael w/ only 1 hand.
Scene 41-
Smith's Grove, Illinois
Caption: SMITH'S GROVE, ILLINOIS.
Eddie:
Hey Jessica!
Jessica (os):
Get away!
Phone rings.
Answering machine gets it.
Jessica's voice:
Hello this is Jessica, can't come to the phone right now so...
Jessica's Voice & Eddie:
...please leave a message, and we'll call you back, have a great day.
Jessica (os):
Ha ha! Very funny!
Emily (vo):
Is he dead?
Scene 42-
Int. -Alley
Brent:
I dunno! Hey where's Lindsey?
Crowd:
Lindsey! Lindsey!
Lindsey (os):
Over here!
Brent/Dustin:
C'mon, you idiots!
Michael raises.
Dustin:
I'm getting sick of him not dying aren't you
DJ?
Rachel (VO from H4):
Die you son of a - !
Some how the VO comes to Brent.
Brent:
Die you son of a (explosion blocking out the word).
John Tate (os):
What the heck is wrong with him?
He enters screen.
John (con't):
Are you okay?
Brent:
Michael!
Brent runs and Michael takes his hand and twists it around.
Brent:
(screams really loud, busting glasses all around).
He falls back, Michael still holds his arm. Michael walks towards Dustin. Dustin walks
backwards. Dustin is against a wall. And Michael raises his knife over Dustin's head.
DUSTIN'S POV: The knife coming down.
Screams are heard then, DUSTIN PUNCHES A HOLE THROUGH MICHAEL'S CHEST. He pulls it out and
paper comes out.
Dustin:
What the - ?
He lifts the mask. ALL IT WAS WHERE BUGS! Snakes come out and everything. Dustin gags.
Caption: A FEW HOURS LATER.
Reporter:
And so, we now Michael Myers is dead. We know since when they
unmasked him, he had bugs instead of himself. His is that
possible!?
Dustin:
Well, when he was knocked out and we thought Brent dehydrated he
switched his body with a hole underneath the gate. We're sure he's
dead, though.
Reporter #2:
Oh, okay, thanks. More on Myers as we return.
Cameraman:
Is that it?
Reporter #2:
Yea, guess it is.
"HALLOWEEN THEME" plays.
FADE OUT.
THE END.
zombievictim
07-22-2005, 05:44 PM
I didn't like the whole thing that Michael is made of bugs. But it was still corny at most parts. As a writer myself I say just to go over improve the dialogue, fix some plots holes, and reimagine the ending. This could be good, just work on it more.
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