rodvcpetrie
01-30-2006, 07:14 PM
I was looking in my short scripts folder and re-read some scripts I had written about two years ago.
I wanted to share one with you in order to gain feedback on what's good and bad so it will help me with future scripts.
The script is called House of Suffering. Its about a teen who saves a webpage containing information on black magic. He intends to try it out that night. He invites his friend and his brother to take part. They unwittingly unleash an evil spirit intent on killing them all.
I have attached the script to this post. Please note I've had to edit it in order for it to fit in a txt document so most of the formatting doesn't carry over. However it is readable as I painstakingly fixed it so it still looks like a script.
I'm looking forward to your feedback!
I wanted to share one with you in order to gain feedback on what's good and bad so it will help me with future scripts.
The script is called House of Suffering. Its about a teen who saves a webpage containing information on black magic. He intends to try it out that night. He invites his friend and his brother to take part. They unwittingly unleash an evil spirit intent on killing them all.
I have attached the script to this post. Please note I've had to edit it in order for it to fit in a txt document so most of the formatting doesn't carry over. However it is readable as I painstakingly fixed it so it still looks like a script.
I'm looking forward to your feedback!