The Killer Next Door

[Bear]

This is my new film, that I actually managed to write over the holidays. It concerns a guy named Gene Caldwell hacking up his wife after a fihgt, and then donning a corpse mask and going a rampage, killing 48 people. The cops caught him, they were gona kill him, but they instead sent him to a mental asylum, which he escaped from, and was never sen again... now, 6 people break into the house to stay the night (one of them bet everybody 100 dollars each to do it) but little do they know that 2 people were slaughtered just minutes bvefore, and soon a killer makes his way into... I let mary lou 102 read the script a couple months ago, but what do yall think? I am still rewriting it and looking for sponsors. I'll post a character list later.

[X-Nightcrawler]

Originally posted by Bear
This is my new film, that I actually managed to write over the holidays. It concerns a guy named Gene Caldwell hacking up his wife after a fihgt, and then donning a corpse mask and going a rampage, killing 48 people. The cops caught him, they were gona kill him, but they instead sent him to a mental asylum, which he escaped from, and was never sen again... now, 6 people break into the house to stay the night (one of them bet everybody 100 dollars each to do it) but little do they know that 2 people were slaughtered just minutes bvefore, and soon a killer makes his way into... I'd love to tell you my thoughts but I can't understand the plot in the way you wrote it. When does the script start? Who's the lead character? Who's the antagonist?