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Old 06-30-2009, 07:25 PM
The Poetry Thread

I know that some of you write poetry. Post your stuff here. NOTE: I would like this thread to be used for discussing each other's poetry. Don't just post something and run off. Give each other feedback.

Here is something I just wrote.

WERE IT NOT

Were it not for the walls
There would be nothing to climb
Over head, under hand
This truth is self-evident
Were it not for contempt
There would be nothing to reflect

If God sees everything,
Then why are we still here?

The mortar is fresh
And were it not for the ground
There would be nothing to catch

Eyewitness son
Were it not for grace
There would be nothing to fall from

If God sees everything,
Then why are we still here?

The holy ghost is in lockstep
With the grout and the swill
Were it not for faith
There would be nothing to kill
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