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Old 03-30-2006, 04:09 AM
Please read - My novel opening...Opinions needed

Please scroll down to my third post.

Last edited by The Young Son; 04-03-2006 at 02:53 AM..
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Old 03-31-2006, 05:07 PM
Come on. It's not that long.
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Old 04-01-2006, 09:55 PM
Originally posted by The Young Son
Come on. It's not that long.
Maybe that's not the problem.
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Old 04-02-2006, 05:07 AM
Whats that supposed to mean?

I welcome any feedback, positive or negative.
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Old 04-02-2006, 12:33 PM
Dude - try separating the text. When you want opinions on your work, it's best not to post a huge solid block of text. People will be put off from the start and won't want to read it.
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Old 04-03-2006, 02:56 AM

I have been throwing ideas around for a couple of years now for a fantasy novel. I have written about four and a half pages so far and I thought you could give me some opinions of what you think. Keep in mind that I write a lot of things that we learn more about as the story goes on. What I have written here is not supposed to make much sense to anyone. You will see two men talking about things as if we are supposed to know what they mean. We don't, at least not yet. So keep an open mind.

You'll need Microsoft Word to read this, probably:
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Old 04-09-2006, 07:46 PM
I skimmed over it quickly the first time and it seemed pretty well-written. I've downloaded it though so I'll take a look at it in a couple days when I have a little more time to devote to it.
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Old 04-15-2006, 02:01 PM
Hey, as a fellow (occasional) writer, I really enjoyed what you've done so far. Personally, I enjoy pieces that start out with that type of description; the setting, weather, etc.

Keep it up, that was great stuff.
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