new movie idea(don't worry,no camcorders involved)

[someguy]

I've decided to make a new idea,so here it goes:Hide and Go

10 friends used to live in the same neighborhood when they were younger. They always played a game in the summer called Hide and Go. They would hide in the neighborhood and try not to caught by the team who's looking for them. The only bad part was that there was no home free. If your tagged,your caught. 10 years later,the place is abandoned and will be plowed down in 1 week to build a mall. One of the friends had an idea to play hide and go one last time. So,he calls on the other 9 people and asks them if they want to play one last time there. They all agree and decide to play. But they all start disappearing when they start playing. Now they can't escape from the place since they broke in from a fence and can't get out since the security is up. Now the game is serious, where you'll die if you get caught.

I'm still changing parts of the story and I want to know if I should cut other things out or explain parts of the story more.

[Vlady]

thats sounds kinda neat [img]/ubb/smile.gif[/img]

[cinger]

I agree with Vlady, sounds very neat.

Les

[Rupert Li]

you might want to get some cards and write down different scenes and segments on each individual card
example
Jay confronts Bob

Bob kills Fred etc .

this way you can rearrange your story in whatever manner you feel like
this method makes experimentation easier and
you get a big picture outlook

[someguy]

Thanks. I was thinking of a scene where a person hides somewhere where it looks like a person is crouching down. His friend comes down to tell him something,but the person ran away,and the killer was in his spot. The killer stabs the person in the stomach. Oh yeah,how they can't get out. The place is guarded with electrical fence. The person who invited them there saw a bum inside. When he asked how he got in,he said everyday from 7:05-7:10pm,there's a glitch in the fence turning the power off. That's the only time they could go in.