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Old 01-28-2013, 10:09 AM
Old Gus - Short horror/comedy script... criticism/tips?

Hello schmoes (do we still call each other that?),

long time no post...

I have a short script I have been working on over the last couple weeks if anyone would like to read it and give me some advice that would be great!

It's 15 pages long, it's about a girl who needs the help of her brother to clean the house before the parents come back home from a holiday. What is causing the mess however, poses more problems than the brother thought.

here is the link: http://www.scribd.com/doc/122544739/Old-Gus

Thank You !
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